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Post by Shadowstalker on Feb 19, 2012 15:48:18 GMT -5
Edit 10/25/12: OH MAH SPRINKING PANTALOONS.....THIS IS ASHJJDSGLDF'DSGS'A;MSaf.d;sgkjs HORRIBLE. MY EYES ARE BURNING. Sorry. Just, I did this 3/4 a year ago and it's literally melting my eyes it's so bad. The anatomy is just atrocious. Thank you all you nice people who actually were kind enough to say this awful piece of suppose "art" was good. My skills are MUCH better now. I'm going to totally re-draw this traditionally (not comp art, with pencil and eraser). Here's an example of my up-to-date art, drawn a week ago at 2:00 in the morning: Well, we all most f us know that Admin is holding a contest for a picture featured in Po3. Well, here's mine so far: (We really need an art forum . . .) 1. Note this is NOT the finished product, lol. Only the main bones of the cats. 2. Added structural background of the sandstone cliffs. 3. Darkened Squirreflight's fur and erased cat bones It's a scene where Jaypaw, Lionpaw, Hollypaw and Squirrelflight have their heads turned away from you. They're looking over a gap by the rim of the hollow across at Ashfur, while fire blazes around them. Tell me what you think so far . . . THIS IS 100000% MINE! I DID NOT TAKE PICTURES AND TRACE, I DID NOT USE LINEART, OR MODIFY MINORLLY NOR HEAVILY A PICTURE. I STARTED FROM A BLANK CANVAS ON PAINT!
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Post by Willowleaf on Feb 19, 2012 16:20:55 GMT -5
I love it, even if it's just fur now.
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Post by Shadowstalker on Feb 19, 2012 16:46:06 GMT -5
*for now
Sorry spelling nazi here xD
Thank you! Though it needs ton of work . . .
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Post by Mod Blackbolt on Feb 19, 2012 18:46:25 GMT -5
*fur as in fur from a cats coat Anyway i like it just as it is
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Post by Shadowstalker on Feb 19, 2012 19:49:51 GMT -5
Well, some porportions are off, like Jaypaw's left foreleg, and Lionblaze's hind legs are off. Squirrelflight looks too calm and relaxed, if you think about what's going on around her.
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Post by Shadowstalker on Feb 20, 2012 17:19:45 GMT -5
Background update: Just the skeletal structure of the sandstone cliffs . . .
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Post by Frostflight on Feb 20, 2012 17:28:50 GMT -5
Cool! :3
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Post by Shadowstalker on Feb 20, 2012 17:37:58 GMT -5
Update: Darkened Squirrelflight's fur and erased cat bones
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Post by Mod Blackbolt on Feb 21, 2012 12:02:35 GMT -5
Sandstone is yellowish, maybe put yellow, red and orange so it mixes with the fire? Besides that is looks fantastic!
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Post by Shadowstalker on Feb 21, 2012 20:00:49 GMT -5
Sandstone is actually more of a rosy pink, but don't forget, it's evening, so the shades of the setting sun turn it redder, along with the flame.s But yeah, that's just the basics . . .
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Wingflight
Warrior
T?was brillig and the slithy tothes did gyre and gimble in the wabe. (FAVOURITE. LINE. EVER!)
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Post by Wingflight on Feb 22, 2012 3:59:25 GMT -5
It is really good, though I think the sized for Lion and Holly are off because at this point they were warriors already. Lionblaze would probably be a bit bigger than Squirrelflight at that point, and Hollyleaf a bit shorter. Jay is fine though, coz he was always described as small.
Other than size, though, it looks really good so far.
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Post by Shadowstalker on Feb 22, 2012 13:28:03 GMT -5
Wing: I just read the book they were in, I thought they were apprentices . . . ?
(Alll mimsy were the boragroves, and the mother wraths outgrabe . . . .
Beware the Jabberwock my son . . . . .
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Post by Mod Blackbolt on Feb 22, 2012 20:27:05 GMT -5
Sandstone is yellow or red depending (looked up on google images and there was both)
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Wingflight
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Post by Wingflight on Feb 23, 2012 2:55:29 GMT -5
Wing: I just read the book they were in, I thought they were apprentices . . . ? (Alll mimsy were the boragroves, and the mother wraths outgrabe . . . . Beware the Jabberwock my son . . . . . No, Lionblaze, Hollyleaf (and cinderheart, for that matter) had been made warriors in Eclipse, and Jayfeather had only just been a full medicine cat when the confrontation with Ashfur happened
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Post by Shadowstalker on Feb 23, 2012 9:51:53 GMT -5
Hmm. Okay then. But remember that Jayfeather was the runt of the litter, and he's always been described as smaller, so . . .yeah.
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Wingflight
Warrior
T?was brillig and the slithy tothes did gyre and gimble in the wabe. (FAVOURITE. LINE. EVER!)
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Post by Wingflight on Feb 24, 2012 8:44:12 GMT -5
Hmm. Okay then. But remember that Jayfeather was the runt of the litter, and he's always been described as smaller, so . . .yeah. I know, and so his size is probably okay, if perhaps a tiny bit bigger, but Hollyleaf and Lionblaze are definitely bigger.
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Wingflight
Warrior
T?was brillig and the slithy tothes did gyre and gimble in the wabe. (FAVOURITE. LINE. EVER!)
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Post by Wingflight on Jul 11, 2012 2:47:41 GMT -5
How are you going on this?
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Post by Shadowstalker on Jul 11, 2012 12:56:36 GMT -5
Derp. I forgot about it. xD Oh well, it's a total fail. The joints are all messed up, and I started over. My cat anatomy has gotten much better, and I'm finally starting to get the heads right.
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Post by Shadowstalker on Jul 11, 2012 13:01:17 GMT -5
I've only drawn the very simple bones of the newest picture, but it's on hold while I finish my Darkheart pic...
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Wingflight
Warrior
T?was brillig and the slithy tothes did gyre and gimble in the wabe. (FAVOURITE. LINE. EVER!)
Posts: 280
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Post by Wingflight on Jul 13, 2012 8:48:20 GMT -5
Cool. I’m sure it will be awesome.
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