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Oct 25, 2011 21:31:10 GMT -5
Post by Pastel on Oct 25, 2011 21:31:10 GMT -5
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scourge
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Fox is my best cousin friend thingy XD
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Oct 26, 2011 18:40:44 GMT -5
Post by scourge on Oct 26, 2011 18:40:44 GMT -5
lol and My cousin said I can post my stories here but the rest of the time it'll be him so yea ^_^ I can't wait to show you more*Insane look*
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scourgey
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Nov 5, 2011 14:20:11 GMT -5
Post by scourgey on Nov 5, 2011 14:20:11 GMT -5
She took a deep breath and looked over to where her home is. She closed her eyes once more and when they were opened she saw the dogs around her “Time to meet Sandpack” Firechaser said staring at Flame. Flame nodded and the pack headed to the border. Sitting there was Sandpack staring at the dogs with narrowed eyes. She took a breath and touched noses with Soulchaser, hadn’t it been only a few minutes before she talked to him? No everything was just going by fast. Firechaser took the lead Soulchaser beside him. The small group of four stood together. Flame smiled at Frozen who just looked ahead. Flame sighed and then she saw it, awaiting for them was Nike and several dogs right across the water. Flame raced to the front the other three following her. She stood in front and stopped the dogs “everyone split up, I want Firechaser to split you into groups make it seem as if your turning around and only a brave few will stay then attack them from behind ok?” Firechaser nodded and split his pack up. Flame smiled and they continued as the others took another route. Flame swam across the river and stopped nose to nose with Nike. Flame jumped up and knocked him down. Then she saw the dogs swarm by her their paws kicking up Sand. Flame got up and grabbed Nike by the neck. She snarled “Where’s Snipes?” He seemed to be shocked by the question “She is in the battle” He said. Flame snarled “Ok then, this means this battle is between me and you” Nike smiled a twisted smile. Flame dug her teeth in deeper in his pelt. Nike just smiled and then Flame felt a searing pain in her chest. She looked down to see he had kicked her. She knocked him down and pinned him snarling in his face, her teeth inches away from his nose. Suddenly the battle vanished around her all that was there was her and Nike. She could only hear his ragged breath. Flame dug her claws into his chest making him howl in pain. She smiled, her smile replicating his evil smile. Flame snarled more and tossed him onto the sand. Nike kicked her off and dashed into the battle disappearing. Flame snarled and chased him but she was knocked to the side by another dog. She looked to see the dog was silver and grey. She knocked the dog away then spotted a orange and grey pelt fighting a dog. She saw the Orange dog fall down, she shook a bit, the dog was Firechaser! She snarled tears filling her eyes, she had respected the leader, and jumped over the dogs landing in front of Firechaser. She snapped at the dog and felt teeth dig into her shoulder she turned to see a small dog digging its teeth into her. She knocked the dog away and dug her teeth into the dog who attacked Firechaser. She heard a familiar voice scream “FLAME!” She turned to see Firechaser being dragged away, her heart almost burst at the moment she had got caught up in revenge. She let go of the dog, spat, then chased after the other dog. She chased the dog her chest feeling as if it was going to explode from running so much. She then spotted the dog sitting Firechaser down in a hole. She tackled the dog and turned it over to spot Snipes “SNIPES?!” She said remembering what Nike said. “I am helping the injured, when Firechaser is ready to fight again he can” Snipes said. Flame hopped off of the dog then dashed off. She spotted Nike about to pounce on Frozen who was intent on another battle. Flame knocked Nike away and pushed him deeper into the sand. Flame spotted a dog charging at her, it was Starkflight, warrior of Dessertpack, she knocked Flame away and snarled “Stay away from my mate you piece of waste” Flame’s eyes widened and she tackled Starkflight “He killed your niece!” She said her eyes widening as she saw Nike push her off. “Shymoon?” Starkflight’s eyes widened and she stared at Nike. “You killed her?” Nike he stared at Starkflight “No I didn’t Flame did” Starkflight looked back and forth staring at the bloody Nike then the innocent looking Flame. The killer was easily overlooked, Flame felt Starkflight snap her jaws tightly around her neck. Flame howled out her eyes growing dull, was her death near? Flame saw a flash of grey dashing forward then she realized it was Sky! Sky knocked Starkflight away his teeth showing. Flame stared wearily at them then she saw Nike approach Sky his teeth showing. She quickly knocked Nike away grabbing him by the neck and tossing him into the ground. She snarled more and she pinned him her claws sliding into his neck. Nike was knocked out now. Flame got off of him and watched a dog scramble up a rock “Killpack turn around we’ve lost this battle!” Flame watched several dogs run off then saw one grab Nike and run off. She smiled, a short smile because Starkflight bit into her neck, causing her to fall down bleeding. It all faded…
Chapter 5 Flame woke to the sound of footsteps, she looked up to see Firechaser pacing in front of her. “You’re awake! I’ve been by your side this whole time, wishing to thank you” Flame smiled and bowed her head “It was my pleasure Firechaser, I am sorry about every single death caused in this battle and past with Nike. I wish I could of come sooner and trained you guys more.” Firechaser just bowed his head “We wish to keep you for one more day that’s all, is that ok?” Flame nodded and smiled a very weak smile, her home sickness return. Firechaser stared at Flame “Sleep my friend, you will be waken at dusk” Firechaser laid down on a rock and closed his eyes Flame suddenly realized she was in the leader’s den, in Firechaser’s bed “Um Firechaser you can sleep here” Firechaser stared at her “Well you need to rest” he mutters. “Then we can share” She scooted over to the edge “just as friends, I’ve seen a couple of your runners share” Firechaser looked hesitant but he soon got up and walked over laying down next to Flame. Flame closed her eyes, she could smell Firechaser’s pelt, it was full of sand somehow she didn’t sneeze. She soon fell asleep. ********* Flame woke up seeing Firechaser had left, she sighed and got up leaving his den. She spotted Sky standing outside smiling “Hi Flame, tomorrow we go home. I’ll miss these dogs but I love my pack back home” Flame nodded and left outside Sky following, the cave was empty no one in sight. When she exited she looked up to see the moon, three or four more nights till its full. She suddenly noticed a large group of dogs in circle, she walked over and sniffed at them checking to see if they were Dessertpack, they were both packs. Flame saw the dogs step to the side giving Flame and Sky a clear way to the certain. Flame suddenly saw Lizard and Frozen she smiled happy she hadn’t lost them. She ran up and touched noses with both, their reunion was short because Firechaser had climbed Sand mount, a small roughly packed rock made of sand. “We can now rest in peace for a little while. Thanks to Flame” The leader said “Thanks Sky” He smiled and stared at Soulchaser who limped up. “I would like to thank Lizard and Frozen!” He called out, soon the scene vanished from Flame. She saw a dog sitting on Cloudrock “Back down Cloudpack, your territory is ours!” Said a grey dog, it looked familiar. Then it hit Flame it was Shack, the eldest warrior of Lakepack. Shack ran down and snarled turning around facing the leader’s den. The scene vanished and Flame was brought back to reality. Firechaser was walking down “We honor your help with a feast, rest, then we let you go” Flame nodded, Firechaser walked up to her and muttered “You and your mate should visit us at least once more” Flame nodded “I’ll never forget you” She said before turning toward the food “You guys learned to hunt our way? I didn’t even teach you” “Wrong my friend, I watched you and then taught me clan” Said Dessertrunner. Flame smiled and looked at the food. Sky had picked a large bird, he dragged it over to her and sat it down. “I thought we could share” Flame nodded and settled down in front of it. They each ate till they were full then they fell sound asleep, pelts touching. *********** “Flame get up, you must travel today, no need to run just Cloudpack will be in trouble if you don’t leave today!” Flame jumped up and nudged Sky awake. When he got up she dashed over to Lizard and Frozen nudging them to wake them “We have to leave now” She said. Frozen and Lizard nodded and they told Soulchaser they had to leave. Flame told Firechaser who looked saddened. “If you must Flame, I was really wishing you could of stayed longer but I understand your pack needs you” Flame nodded and licked him. She stretched and looked over her shoulder at the others.
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scourgey
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Nov 9, 2011 19:51:42 GMT -5
Post by scourgey on Nov 9, 2011 19:51:42 GMT -5
She sighed and headed out her paws sinking into the sand she looked back to make sure Sky, Frozen and Lizard were following. Soon Sky took the lead Frozen next to him her head held high, Flame fell behind to stand by Lizard. “Hey Lizard” She said awkwardly. “Hey Flame” He said looking ahead. “You know a certain apprentice likes you” She looked at him. “Huh? Who?” He asked staring at her now. “Frozen duh!” She barked at him. Lizard seemed silent for a minute and then ran to catch up with the others. Flame followed now instead of kicking Sand up she slipped easily into it like she did with the paw prints back home. She sped up to the front spotting the woods she sped up faster and faster, home wasn’t far away! ******** Scout limped out of the medicine dogs den his eyes shining in the dim sunlight, he looked over to spot dogs staring at him. He heard some things that made his stomach churned. “Rose wasn’t properly buried, her soul will forever haunt this place!” He knew how horrible this meant to his pack, and with two days till the gathering! He yawned and sat down. Coco was talking to Lily about something most likely about her puppies being due any day. He smiled knowing they were he would soon have a bigger family, Flame was gone though he would of loved to have her there to play with the puppies but his pups will have to say what Scout did about their aunt, she’s dead. ********* Flame ran even faster the woods only a little away her heart racing her eyes twinkling, forgetting about her whole past with Sandpack, all she could think of was her pack no one else’s. She soon felt the sand vanish replaced by dirt and grass. Her heart was no longer racing it felt as if it was about to explode with happiness! She rubbed her face against the ground to get rid of the smell of Sandpack, then she rubbed against a tree getting her Cloudpack sent back. She looked back to see the others following her, then they all howled together it was loud enough to be heard by their pack it seemed. ************ Scout flinched when he heard a loud howl it might be some rouges or some other clan he thought but it was hauntingly familiar. He looked outside was his sister returning? His heart pounded against his chest, he was full of happiness. ************* Flame soon looked back at the sand filled dessert. She took a breath and walked forward then she crouched low bunching her muscles together and jumping on a branch, it swayed a bit but then eased itself. She continued to travel that way the others following at this rate they’ll be home by night! She continued until she saw the camp entrance the sun had vanished and the moon had rose, she was home now and she would return to her other problems. But then it hit her, she remembered the attack she had seen, she dashed quickly off toward camp. ********** Sky watched Flame dash off his heart pounding he remembered his vision, he quickly ran after her his eyes wide with terror. *********** Scout was discouraged when he didn’t see his sister but now he was sleeping soundly. Then he heard it a loud howl from the nursery, his pups and mate! He got up and limped out as fast as he could to the nursery. ************ Flame ran faster and faster she soon was scraped as always by the branches forgetting about her sore muscles she stopped to watch Soul run past as in her vision. She took a deep breath and watched the bushes around Cloudpack, then out came Lakepack their pelts matted and their ribs showing. Flame turned and chased after Fish her eyes determined. When she entered the nursery Fish was lunging for Scout teeth showing. Flame knocked Fish away and was grabbed by the neck. ************** Scout’s heart nearly burst when Flame entered and saved him, but now he had to act fast, Fish had Flame grabbed by the neck, Flame’s struggle going feeble. Scout pulled Flame away and then snarled at Fish not caring if she killed him only caring about his family. *********** Sky knocked Beauty away then ran to see Sun was gone, where had the elder gone?! He looked around to spot the elder in front of a litter of puppies snarling at a Lakepack warrior, wow for an elder Sun was fast. Sky dashed forward struggling to get to her from all the dogs landing in front of him, he couldn’t lose she was like the mother he always wanted. Sun was now cowering back as a warrior jumped at her. ************** Flame was shocked to have her brother next to her but what shocked her more was Flicker entering the den, he was Lakepack’s medicine dog! Coco was in front of him helping Flicker help Lily. Fish stared at Flicker then at Flame “Let’s take this battle outside shall we?” Asked the Lakepack leader. Flame didn’t answer she just knocked Fish through the bush covering the den then jumping out and landing on her “FISH I AM TIRED OF YOU!” Flame said biting the leader’s neck, Fish kicked out only to fall down on her stomach. Flame got off of Fish but didn’t let go of her neck tossing her into the outside bush of the camp. Flame snarled and jumped after her, she wasn’t going to let Fish off easy this time ************ Scout watched his sister knock Fish out of the den, he turned to Lily licking her comfortingly “WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!” Lily snarled. Scout jumped back at her words “What?” he said his voice showing shock. “GET OUT AND PROTECT OUR PACK!” Scout looked out only to see a dog land right outside the nursery. “I’ll be back Lily” he said dashing out his eyes on one warrior the one who had killed Rose. ********** Sky sped up and knocked the warrior away from Sun “Take them to the elders den now Sun!!” Sky snarled his words harsh, hoping she would obey and leave. Sun looked at him for a moment making him think she would refuse and say no, of course she would she’s more stubborn then Flame. Sun nodded and left picking up the puppies. Sky was bewildered, while he sat there confused he was tackled by something that felt like a huge boulder. ************ Flame stared at Fish her green eyes shimmering with delight. “You’re in my territory waste-eater” She said picking Fish up and jumping in a tree she tossed the leader across to another branch then sat there smiling as Fish scramble to get a hold, she was howling and yipping. Flame jumped across to her and the branch wobbled making Fish loose her balance and fall down a bit before Flame grabbed her neck fur gently and put her back on the branch. Flame spotted a hole in the tree just big enough for a dog to fit through, her smile widened and she stared at Fish ramming her into the tree and Fish whimpered backing into the hole. “What’s the big idea Fish?!” Flame said. “We need territory!” Fish cried out jumping out of the hole and knocking Flame backwards. Flame was now on her back feet; she lost her footing and fell backwards. ************** Scout stared at the dog as he grabbed its throat and shoved its face into the ground. The dog clawed at Scout tearing into his fur. Scout ignored the pain as he shoved the dog further into the ground. “Mercy Scout!” Shouted something he looked up to see Rose and Soul staring at him. Scout tossed the dog away and stared at them then he felt something like Razors dig into his neck. *********** Sky fell down his eyes wide. He looked over his shoulder to see a warrior digging its teeth into his shoulder, he just laid there his eyes wide. He saw a flash of purple then a dog stood in front of him, Kira . “Hey Sky welcome back. See I would save you but where’s that Flame of yours? See she doesn’t care about you like I do Sky…I love you and would never leave you! Come on Sky we grew up together I can’t live without you I joined this silly pack for you!” Sky shook his head no. “What if something happened to Flame then you’d have to take me back!” She said her eyes glowing. “no you wouldn’t Kira!” But it was too late Kira was dashing back into the battle laughing wildly.
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scourgey
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Nov 9, 2011 20:10:58 GMT -5
Post by scourgey on Nov 9, 2011 20:10:58 GMT -5
Flame grabbed the branch with her paws, she looked below and tried to get a grip on the bottom branch it was so close! She then spotted something purple entering from a bush. “KIRA! COME HELP ME UP!” Flame screamed Kira climbed the tree up to her only to be blocked by Fish. Kira whispered something to Fish then Walked past to Flame. “Hello Flame, you know I’ve like Sky since we were puppies right?” Kira asked staring at Flame intently. “No I didn’t b-but we’re mates now I’m sorry I’m sure another dog will come around” Kira shook her head “Silly naïve Flame, See Sky’s the one and only, he belongs to me not some fake dog” Flame’s eyes widened she couldn’t believe what she was hearing. Kira then unwrapped her paws from the branch and bit them to make sure she fell. Flame howled and hit the ground her head dizzy, she was alive! “WHAT? HOW’D YOU SURVIVE!” Kira snarled. Fish jumped down, Kira following. “Flame I’ll kill you either way as long as I can have Sky” Flame barely stood up blood oozing from her head and other places. “He wouldn’t be mates with you if you were the last dog on earth!” Flame said jumping on Kira, using all her strength but then Fish knocked her off and pinned her. Flame could feel Starpack creeping up, waiting to snatch another life. ************ Scout knocked the dog away and felt blood pour down his neck from the tear, he looked around to see Coco running over and wrapping very thin vines around the wound before dashing back off. Scout was about to limp his way back to his mate when Sky ran up. “Scout, its Flame, Kira is going to kill her I think!” Sky shouted.
Chapter 6 Flame felt as if her head was spinning, she couldn’t believe this might be her last battle, she wouldn’t even see her father before she died. She then felt the weight lifted and a soft comforting voice said to her “It’s ok Flame, Scout and I will take care of them rest but don’t sleep I’ll be back” She knew Sky’s voice from anywhere, she then felt his paws dashing off, she wished he didn’t leave but she knew he had to do what he had to do. She laid there forcing herself not to sleep. She soon heard footsteps run over her. She then felt Sky press his pelt against her. She blacked out thinking Wow I am accident prone. ************ Sky looked at Flame. “Flame give me a sign your with us!” He said, his voice was shaking and his vision was blurred with tears. Scout stood over Flame “I promised I wouldn’t kill. But she threatened the pack” Sky snarled and looked at Scout “Think about someone else at the moment look at Flame! She’s barely alive!” Scout seemed to finally notice because he picked up Flame gently, they both carried her to camp. They spotted Coco helping the injured but she stopped when she spotted Flame. “Flicker come over here and tell me what’s wrong with her” Flicker sniffed at Flame and said “she has a severe head wound and is scratched all over” Coco nodded. “Get me sleep herbs and thin vines.” Flicker dashed off. “Shouldn’t Flicker be back with his pack?” Asked Scout. “Flicker was kicked out and is now my apprentice apparently Lakepack found another medicine dog and he doesn’t seem to care” Coco said licking Flame. Soon Flicker returned and the herbs were applied to the wounds.
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scourgey
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Nov 9, 2011 20:32:20 GMT -5
Post by scourgey on Nov 9, 2011 20:32:20 GMT -5
Sky hoped Flame would come back to them soon. *********** Scout stayed with Flame for a bit but feeling weird with Sky licking her and trying to wake her he left to his own mate. Lily sat there licking four beautiful puppies. One looked frighteningly like Soul. “You can name two and I’ll name the others” Scout nodded and looked at the one boy and girl. He had gotten the one who had looked like Soul to name. “Spirit” He said smiling. Then he looked at the girl, it looked like Lily. “Ghost” he said licking the puppy. He looked at Lily “Fire and Half” Half had what looked like to different faces. Scout smiled and stared out. ************* Sky pressed his pelt against Flame resting his head on her, then he heard something that sounded like Flame’s voice it said “Sky?” He looked at her his tail wagging but he saw nothing but her eyes closed and her resting his eyes. He whimpered and his ears went down, he rested his on her again then heard it again but louder. “Sky?” This time Flame stared at him, his heart seemed to be coming back to life he could of sworn all the packs could hear it go pitter patter. “FLAME!” He shouted at her his eyes widening. “Sky!” She said wearily her smile was pure and her tail wagged. Their reunion was short, K.O howled from Cloud rock. Flame got up and almost fell, Sky helped her back up and they walked out.
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scourgey
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Nov 11, 2011 19:46:19 GMT -5
Post by scourgey on Nov 11, 2011 19:46:19 GMT -5
K.O’s pelt was not tended to so it was matted and torn in some places. Red sat under cloud rock her pelt looking the same, she looked weary and tired, not the same dog she used to be. “I have to say Red and I are getting old, Red has decided to give the deputy position to one of you” Red nodded. “Red you may tell them” K.O said sitting on the rock. Red stood up before the pack “This dog has an apprentice right now and has helped this pack so much it makes them a legend, this dog disappeared for a while but returned to us soon after, in our time of need” Red looked around then her eyes fell on Flame. “You’re our new deputy, now answer the question we were all thinking. Where’d you go and what happened?” Red asked soon looking around. The pack nodded and Red left so Flame could stand up front, K.O hopped down and left to his den with Red following. Flame looked at Cloud rock and climbed up then sat there. “We left to help two packs just outside the territory they live in a place full of Sand! We taught them our ways so they can battle the rouges that took almost over half their land! Well soon a battle happened and they won, we all loved staying and learning about the packs. Now any questions?” A pup stood up “Well why’d they move so far out?” Flame stood still and shrugged “Never asked” The dogs looked back and forth their eyes questioning their new deputy’s words. “Wow, and why’d you leave us if we were in more danger than the other packs!” Shouted another puppy. “You guys could handle yourselves that’s why duh!” Flame said smiling. The dogs smiled then Fawn stood up “well who’s going to the gathering?” She asked. “Well you can, Shiver, Sky, Lizard, Tiger, and Fince. I must say that Frozen won’t be going” All dogs gasped, the dog had came with them to help the packs, she deserved to come! “Frozen I want you to go hunt for the pack tonight then tomorrow sleep in the warriors den” Several dogs howled happily and Frozen stood there her mouth wide open. Flame smiled and got down ignoring the pain in her legs she walked over to the certain of camp looking around, Sky walked up to her “Want to walk?” He asked and Flame nodded. They both left together and soon they saw an Orange and Tan dog. “FIRECHASER?!” Flame hollered out. Firechaser stared at her his eyes shining. “Thank Sand chasers it’s you! I thought you were another of those nice yet wants me to join their pack dogs.” Flame nodded knowing it was Forestpack. “I came to say something but I will tell you later may I rest?” Flame nodded and lead him back to camp, she lead him to the medicine dog’s den where Coco let him in and sat him down in a nest to rest. Flame yawned and left looking around it was almost night she might as well leave for the gathering. She gathered her pack together then left with Sky by her side. Flame ran quickly past Lakepack territory scared they would start a fight, she then entered the gathering place, she took a deep breath and walked into the hollow. She stared at Bark, Dark, and Fish smiling weakly. They all nodded except Fish who just stared ahead. Flame climbed up and sat down. Bark howled then stared at Flame “Young one can go first” Flame nodded her thanks and sat up front “Well I have returned from a great journey only to see my pack attacked by Lakepack then be almost killed for the 50th time in my life. Then I recall becoming Deputy today” All the dogs howled out loud smiling. “Then-” Flame was cut off by a dog bursting into the gathering place panting, it looked distressed its eyes wide “Its- Flame- Mountain lion in camp, need help everyone must return” Flame’s claws slid out, she always had a battle to fight. She ran down then dashed off her eyes darting back to Fish once then dashing off taking the lead. She jumped over the border then took the sharpest turn in her life, she then dashed into camp to see a big mother mountain lion in there, oh perfect a mother! Flame could smell the milk on the cat. She jumped up and dug her teeth into the giant cats back foot only to be tossed into some nearby bushes, she was about to run back when some dog shouted “STOP BEING A HERO FLAME! JUST GIVE THE ACT UP!” Flame looked around then dashed back not caring as she spun onto its back and dug her teeth into its back. She pushed off and tore its fur and muscle off she tossed it away and flinched at seeing the bone, she walked to its head and dug her teeth near its head, she didn’t tear fur just dug her claws into its back and into the bone piece. The lion swayed and she saw other dogs jump at it digging their teeth and claws at it. Tiger and Fawn worked together on its muzzle while Sky was at its stomach. The lion clawed furiously at everyone hitting one dog then another soon the dogs retreated backwards. Flame shook her head and let go of its head then did a dangerous thing, she swung down to its neck and dug in, she then swung back and forth tearing the skin slowly, the dogs around her stared in awe, amazed at her braveness. Flame swung off and the lion fell down its eyes closing. The dogs looked at each other and Flame stood amazed she hadn’t fainted. She looked around to see Sun enter and stare at Flame. “You actually amaze me” Sun said all the dogs nodded except one. “I’ll never except you Flame!” shouted Cricket, an old warrior. “You think you’re a hero but you’re not your just a normal warrior!” Flame stared at him “I might just be a warrior but unlike you I have respect for others” Cricket shrank back making Flame nod her head then turned to see where Sky was. Sky was sitting next to the mountain lion. Flame looked at the ground and thought about what would of happened if she had lost a pack member, as deputy she should help her pack. She looked around and took a deep breath. She looked at all the dogs then noticed some of them were broken into groups, what had happened while she was gone? Had her pack given up? She spotted Fawn licking her brown pelt. Flame padded forward and looked at her apprentice “Gather all the warrior apprentices and head to training trees now” Fawn nodded and dashed off quickly to stunned to speak. Flame looked around and spotted Scout she walked over and told him “First organize a group to dispose of the mountain lion then go train with the apprentices of the Scouters.” Scout nodded and Flame quickly told the leader of the builders what to do then she left to the training trees. When she entered she looked around to see the apprentices sitting down on the stone ground. She looked at them happily before sitting down in the front. “I wish to say we can put the past behind us and pretend I never left. Where did you guys leave off before I was made deputy?” Fawn looked at Tiger then she spoke up “Well we were really never trained together” Flame almost fell down on the ground right there of course the leader and former deputy had been distant. “Well then tree practice, everyone I want you up those trees right now” Tiger looked up at the tree his eyes wide and his whole body shaking. Flame smirked and jumped into a tree it swayed and then stood “I know it’s night but look day is soon so come on. Don’t be shaken up by all our battles it’s just a battle” Flame said climbing higher not letting the dogs see her fear. Fawn bent down and jumped up her claws scraping the branch but she fell down plummeting onto Tiger. Tiger howled out and the other apprentices howled back in fear. Flame sighed and called down “Fawn good try just need to jump a tiny bit higher” Fawn stared at Flame then jumped off Tiger. She looked at the branch and crouched low backing away a bit her muscles bunched together. She jumped on the branch and spun a bit before landing on the branch clinging to it for dear life her eyes wide and scared. Tiger looked up “Now what Flame Fawn’s up there!” He called out “Well I told you all to get up in the trees just not Fawn” Tiger stared at Flame as if she was crazy. Flame just shrugged and climbed further up. Tiger looked at the other apprentices “We have to do this to prove to Flame we’re worthy I mean getting her praise is like being praised by Cloud himself!” The apprentices nodded then jumped up missing. Tiger looked around trying to think. “Wait guys watch this” He ran full speed at a tree then jumped up against pushing off and landing in a branch. The apprentices stood wide eyed at him “NO WAY AM I DOING THAT!” Called Sparrow the pretty brown and blue eyed apprentice said. Tiger snarled “Sis come on try to get up now!” Sparrow shook her head then snorted. Flame watched and sighed, training them is going to be harder than she thought.
Chapter 7 Flame looked at the sky and sighed Firechaser had told her she would have to wait for her message. He was now talking to the clan about his pack how it was different from most and about how she helped them a lot. Lizard was out hunting with Frozen. Sky was asleep soundly beside Flame his pelt moving up and down. *************** Scout looked out thinking about his pups and mate, did Lily really like him? No she was just using him to ignore the pain of Soul. He hated the thoughts and he didn’t think he belonged with her. He wanted to see the puppies but they just brought back the thoughts. He could hear them squealing from the nursery, he flattened his ears hoping the sound would vanish.(ok Fox was wondering if anyone still read this..)
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Nov 11, 2011 20:08:57 GMT -5
Post by scourgey on Nov 11, 2011 20:08:57 GMT -5
He looked outside to see Blazer pacing around ignoring any pain he had left it seemed. Scout stumbled out and stared at Cloud rock blinking away his tiredness. He looked to see Lily carry his pups out and smile at him. He ducked behind Blazer. “Scout your acting like a puppy she’s your mate go meet her!” Blazer said, Scout just dashed out and closed his eyes. He walked to the lake and laid there letting the water splash on him his eyes remaining open the whole night. He didn’t want to go home, not wanting to see his mate. ************** Flame sat there looking ahead her eyes narrowed. She tackled the dog and smiled “Pooch!” She said knocking the dog into the water too. “Flame!” It said smiling, the dog was grey and white. “Sky You have been defeated!” She said sticking her tongue out at him. “what?” He said knocking her off and pinning her. She laughed sending bubbles of water up. Sky laughed and jumped off running deeper. Flame chased him and then smiled her eyes narrowed. “What?” She rams her tail into the water sending droplets up. “NO!” He screamed/laughed as he tried to run off in the deep water. Flame laughed and chased him “GET BACK HERE SKY!” She called chasing him her swimming skills better than his. She catches up to him and splashes water in his face.
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Nov 12, 2011 0:53:06 GMT -5
Post by scourgey on Nov 12, 2011 0:53:06 GMT -5
He snarls but smiles as he splashes her back. “Oh you’re going to get it pooch” He smiled and dashed off sending water everywhere. Flame followed him her eyes showing determination. Sky tripped and fell into the water head first. Flame tackled him and they spun in the water their eyes locked on each other though. Flame narrowed her eyes and splashed him again, he then splashed at her. They soon where splashing back and forth. “Curse you Flame!” Sky shouted going under the water. Flame ran over and laughed pulling him out. “You look more like a rat, great I grabbed the wrong thing” She shoved Sky back under and continued looking then finally pulled him back up. He squirted water at her then smiled. She narrowed her eyes and tackled him sending them both under again, they spun under the water for a bit till Sky popped his head out to get a breath, he soon caught his breath and sighed. Flame looked at him then followed his gaze to the Owners home. “Really Sky? Do you miss them?” He nodded and Flame smiled. “Sky I have a present for you” he stared at her dumb founded. She rolled her eyes and left the water “Well come on!” She called over her shoulder running to the homes. She then turned to the dirt road and run down it not kicking gravel up. Sky followed both sounded silent across the path. Flame then stopped in front of a house with a white fence. Sky stopped his eyes widening. “Flame, it’s my home!” he shouted opening the gate and dashing down the path. Flame tackled him and Sky almost yowled out. “No they can’t see you!” Flame said. Sky looked up to see his former male owner sitting next to a female with a large round belly, he was patting it. “They’re going to have a pup of their own!” He shouted. Flame shook her head “Their called kids” Sky stared at them his head spinning, he wanted to run to his former owner and lick him to death. A dog looked at them with his mate. “Hmm what are you doing here?” Asked the dog “Oh this is my former home” Sky said. “So you must be this dog I always heard of well not to sound mean but thanks for leaving you gave me and my sweety a home for us and maybe our puppies” Sky nodded “You’re welcome, I have my own home now, it’s called Cloudpack” the dog sat there staring at him “You made it into the packs of ruthless dogs?” Sky nodded “They aren’t as mean as they seem well if you enter our territory we’ll attack anyways this is my mate Flame” Flame nodded Shyly at the dog standing by Sky their pelts touching. The dog nodded and stared at Flame “You might want to get home now” Flame nodded and stared at the dog. She dashed out followed by Sky. She dashed back home and into the water swimming until she was deep into the water. “Hmm” She muttered, she had seen something back there a brown dog playing with a white dog and it didn’t feel right. She shook her head and looked around to spot Sky climb into the water. They continued their play fight ignoring their short detour. ******* Scout hid in the bushes his eyes dark and when he saw Lily enter he ran off. Lily looked at him and shook her head. Scout felt weird around Lily ever since he came to the conclusion that Lily was using him for a back up. Scout dashed across the stones to the island holding their big spirit pool. He turned quickly tossing up dirt then he saw two dogs crouched down talking. He quickly hid in a bush. “Cloud I don’t want to break the news to Flame! I mean I care for her we’re more than friends, we’re Family” The dog talking was Orange and tan. “You must” The dogs words were simple but they sent shivers up Scout’s spine, the dog had a deep voice and it was very fat looking. The Orange and Tan dog looked at his paws “I don’t want to but if I must I will” He muttered. “I am sorry you have to do this but your close to Flame” The Orange and Tan dog stared at Cloud “You’re kidding right? Sky’s closer” Cloud looked at the dog his blue eyes dull “Sky would freak out, he looks to that dog as his own father” The dog nodded and Cloud vanished. The dog ran off his eyes dark. Scout turned to watch him go, something was up and he needed to know. He crouched low and snuck up to the dog but then he spotted Lily. He dashed off quickly not wanting to run into his mate. ******** Flame walked onto shore and shook her pelt fluffing it out. She looked at Sky and yawned, Sky stretched and they left together. Flame smiled she felt as if things where normal all until they entered the moonlit clearing. There was an Orange and tan dog sitting on a rock “Flame and Sky we must talk” Flame looked at Sky then sat down. Sky sat beside staring at Firechaser. “What’s the problem?” Flame asked scared to know the answer. “I had this dream where two of your dogs died but I am not allowed to say" (Fox says thats the end of book 2 its 100 pages in microsoft word(Put it in book form though not printout))
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Nov 12, 2011 13:51:27 GMT -5
Post by scourgey on Nov 12, 2011 13:51:27 GMT -5
Prologue A gathering was being held in the stars. A white dog with a deep booming voice was sitting up front. Next to it was a black dog with green eyes, it looked to be the age of a soon to be warrior apprentice. Around them was dogs of several colors one had a pink fluffy pelt. “Well hello Flutter nice of you to join us” Said the white dog staring at the pink fluffy dog. “Well it isn’t every day I am called to a meeting.” Cloud nodded.
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Nov 12, 2011 14:45:46 GMT -5
Post by scourgey on Nov 12, 2011 14:45:46 GMT -5
. Flutter smiled in her innocent way and looked around. Cloud sighed “I wish I never had to have us gather on such a sad note” Flutter’s tail had stopped its wagging now she was frozen. “Your here to tell us two great dogs will be joining us are you?” She asked. Cloud said nothing, just stared at his paws. “We’re here for that aren’t we!” Flutter said her eyes glittered with tears, she hated death. A black and silver dog stood up “Please tell me it isn’t my dearest Lily” Cloud shook his head “Soul your former love is fine.” Then black dog stood up “It’s them isn’t it!” She challenged her eyes showing determination. “I’m sorry” Was all Cloud said.
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Nov 12, 2011 15:02:35 GMT -5
Post by scourgey on Nov 12, 2011 15:02:35 GMT -5
Coal snarled “You can’t!” She said snapping at Cloud. Cloud stared at Coal “You may be quiet” He said commanding her. Coal stepped back and sat down. Then a starry dog appeared. “It’s the wise one” The dog nodded “It’s their time Coal I am very sorry” His voice was smooth and full of sadness.
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Nov 30, 2011 22:41:36 GMT -5
Post by scourgey on Nov 30, 2011 22:41:36 GMT -5
(Fox is serously wanting to know if someone is still reading this because she's had thoughts of stopping and doing another book about other things) Chapter one Flame yawned and stretched, she looked around the dogs around her were sleeping silently. She looked out and saw the moon in the sky, it wasn’t completely round but it was almost. Tomorrow was the gathering, the day she would prove Cloudpack is good again, but they weren’t. She stared at the forest outside. Next to her was Sky, curled up in a little ball. She was always near the entrance of the warriors den, ready to run into action. She spotted a bush rustling outside the camp. She jumped out her fur bristled, in came Flicker “sorry Flame I was just needing to gather some herbs” Flame just nodded, she knew she couldn’t go back to sleep so she stayed near the entrance. Her eyes were open, she felt as if the weight of her pack was on her shoulders. ************ Lily woke up to the sound of dogs talking. She nosed her puppies awake and they squealed out. “Mommy where’s daddy!?” Ghost said. Spirit nudged his sister aside “Mommy I want daddy!” Lily stared at the puppies then at the other one, Fire had died from a collapsed rock near Cloud rock. Half was yawning her blue reflective pelt glistering in the dim light. Lily sighed “I am sorry” She got up and looked out. She spotted Flame getting patrols ready, Flame looked worn out and stressed she seemed to be getting little or no sleep. Sky looked a bit better but it wasn’t much of a difference, when they couldn’t contact Flame they ran to him. Lily saw Scout and her tail wagged she called out to him and he ignored her looking at Blazer and discussing something. Lily looked at her paws and she laid down in her nest. Her pups cuddled next to her and she wagged her tail falling asleep. *********** Sky looked toward the leaders den, he needed K.O back as their leader. He loved how good of a fighter K.O was how K.O had saved him from the battle when he was younger. Sky sighed and looked to see Flame walk toward him “ok all the patrols are set up I have already decided the warriors going to the gathering and oh my! I forgot to set up some apprentices to help the mothers and elders!” Sky licked his mate her body relaxed “Ugh Why am I put in this situation?” Sky shrugged and he watched Flame leave her eyes dark and clouded. ************* Flame looked around then she saw it. She saw a dog growling and fighting with all his might in front of a dog. “I’ll protect you!” He shouted jumping close next to her; she suddenly could feel the love tension between them. She felt her heart lurch when she saw it was Firechaser and a dog, something stirred within was it jealousy? No she was happy for him but he was closer than a friend right? No he was a brother to her she couldn’t possibly love him but before she could think again the scene changed and it was now Firechaser jumping in front of Flame “I’ll protect you Flame” Flame’s eyes shot open, “I d-don’t love him he’s just another dog right?” She looked around before jumping into a tree. She looked out then spotted a dog nudging some puppies. Flame walked forward but she stepped back not wanting to frighten it. “Mama, where’s bubba?” She looked away and then stared up “He’s in the stars, now come on you guys need to rest” She nudged them into a little nest. “But it’s still day light and papa hasn’t returned from his nap” The mother seemed to snap “Your father is napping, he’s dead you know that mountain lion was going to kill you?” The puppy squirmed backwards into his two sisters. Flame stepped forward out of the shadows and the mother snarled defensively. “Are you guys ok? Where’s the mountain lion?” Flame said calmly. The mother relaxed a tiny bit and pointed toward the lake. “Stay here” Flame said simply running off toward the lake. She stopped quickly almost falling into the hole sending rock clattering down. She looked down to hear snoring, she looked over to see a family of Mountain lion sleeping, she would have to hide this from her pack till the whole building them back was done. She walked back to the mother and stared at them. “You need a place to rest, you’re welcome to stay in my pack” The mother nodded happily, She gathered her pups up and they left. Flame entered her camp and the pups ran off, she smiled. ************ Lily was helping the mother and her pups settle down when she heard Ghost and Spirit playing outside. “Please be quiet” She barked setting the nest up. When it was done she went out to see Scout talking to Ripple. Ripple was a pretty silver dog with light silver dots on her pelt, her legs were a light silver like the dots and she had a light silver muzzle her eyes where a beautiful Violet. Lily felt jealousy rise inside of her, what did Ripple have that she didn’t? Scout laughed and Ripple smirked. Lily’s ears went down and she looked around the clearing to spot Flame talking to Sky. Lily turned to her puppies “Stay put” She said leaving, She looked at Flame and sighed, she padded up to her. “Flame may we speak in private” Flame nodded and they left. Flame paused at the small stream not far from camp. Lily looked at Flame taking a breath “I have to know, has Scout mentioned me?” Flame stared at Lily blankly then her ears perked. “Um no he hasn’t sorry” Flame was somewhere Lily could tell. “Flame what’s wrong” Flame looked away. “Nothing” She said sighing. Lily knew something was up “Flame please tell me” She said staring at the dog. “It’s Firechaser…I keep having these dreams about him it’s weird” Lily nodded as if she understood but she didn’t Flame was just having dreams it didn’t mean much. ********* Flame could still picture herself laying in Firechaser’s nest, he was curled up next to her she knew he was a great friend but could they be more? She wished she could see him again but she would never. She looked at Lily again then remembered her problem. “Scout might just need to cope with the new pups” She said staring at the setting sun. Lily nodded and licked Flame before leaving. Flame dashed back to camp to be bombarded with questions. She backed up and howled “The warriors coming to the gathering are Fawn, Tiger, Lizard, Frozen, Rabbit, Sky, and Shallow” She took a breath seeing Sky walk toward her smiling proudly at his mate “You’re doing fine the pack is fine too” She shook her head “No we’re horrible looking look around at us” Sky looked around and spotted Dogs going into groups to talk, he sighed “I’m sorry Flame.” Flame shook her head walking towards the Kill pile. She picked a small rabbit up and fluffed her pelt do to the cold weather, it was now changing from warm to cold. She looked around again searching for her mate who was now watching Spirit play fight his sister Half. Flame wondered what their paths held She wondered if Half would ever be a great warrior because of her failing sight. She could picture Spirit as a warrior though he was strong but not wise. She looked at the sky wondering if her ancestors were watching the pups
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Dec 1, 2011 11:19:47 GMT -5
Post by Mod Blackbolt on Dec 1, 2011 11:19:47 GMT -5
soooo much writing 0.0
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Dec 1, 2011 17:45:45 GMT -5
Post by scourgey on Dec 1, 2011 17:45:45 GMT -5
She's obsessed as I speak she's emailing me writing
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Dec 1, 2011 17:54:50 GMT -5
Post by Mod Blackbolt on Dec 1, 2011 17:54:50 GMT -5
wow
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Dec 1, 2011 17:55:20 GMT -5
Post by fairytailaddict on Dec 1, 2011 17:55:20 GMT -5
O.O holy crap.... And I thought i wrote a lot....
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Dec 1, 2011 19:13:47 GMT -5
Post by scourgey on Dec 1, 2011 19:13:47 GMT -5
(lol well here's more writing from her) She looked at the sky wondering if her ancestors were watching the pups play and watching the pack fall apart. She got lost in thought then heard Boulder howl at her to get up front. She walked up front and looked back at the pack, she had chosen the least affected warriors and she hoped Blazer and Boulder has chose the least affected Scouters and Builders. She looked up at the sky once more before walking out in no hurry. She was silently praying that the packs wouldn’t notice how edgy her pack was. She looked back to see Lily standing behind Scout, the mother had her head down and was whimpering. Scout was talking to Ripple. Flame looked back ahead letting Sky walk beside her his tail draped over her shoulders. Flame could see the bright light of the moon shining down on the clearing. She entered to see Forestpack and Lakepack chatting. There was no sign of Darkpack and Fish’s new deputy, Trout, sat at the rock. Flame’s stomach became queasy, where was the Lakepack leader? She stared at Bark who shrugged and Flame nodded, is this how the other packs felt when she stood at Pack rock? She stood there her eyes shining in the moonlight and Bark nodded a hello “Nice for you to join us Flame, your pack is doing well I suppose?” Flame looked down at her pack before answering, her eyes scoped the crowd of warriors, Builders, Scouters, Queens, and elders. She looked back at Bark “Yes we are how’s your pack doing?” Bark seemed to mull that over in his head a bit “Fine it’s been fine” Then I finally turned to Trout, the question that had been gnawing at her would finally be answered. “Where’s Fish?” She asked concern in her voice. Trout didn’t answer for a moment and just stared out, for a second Flame thought he hadn’t heard her but before she could repeat herself he spoke “She’s under the weather..she’ll be at the next gathering” Flame nodded and then looked at Bark “Any sign of Darkpack?” he shook his head. “It’s as if they never existed we haven’t seen them at the border have you Trout?” Trout shook his head no turning to them “We have no idea where they went but Trust me we have nothing to do this” Flame’s pelt felt hot with embarrassment before he had said that her exact thoughts were they had something to do with it. She nodded a bit before turning back to the crowd. Trout wasn’t going to begin the gathering either was Bark. Flame sighed and howled the whole group of dogs turned to her. “It seems as if Darkpack isn’t joining us-” She was interrupted by Shadow dashing into the clearing “We’re leaving the packs!”
Chapter 2 Flame gasped and she almost burst out no but she remained calm on the outside “Explain yourself Shadow” Shadow nodded as if thanking her then turned to the packs “Darkpack has had great suffering since it existed we now lost a whole nursery of puppies due to death cold” She looked at Flame then the other dogs, Flame felt herself vanish from the place she was and appear in Darkpack territory around her was cheering dogs “We won Dark!” Shouted a female dog from the back. Dark nodded, then the image faltered to show a recent scene of Shadow standing on top of Dark rock. “We’ve won against Lakepack! We’re the best pack ever!” She howled. The images faded and Flame snapped back to reality. “wait!” She said to Shadow who was leaving “Your pack is fine! Stay and wait if you’re not better leave” Shadow looked at Flame and sighed “Fine I’m sorry for making an outburst but only a moon. We won’t be at this gathering but maybe the next” She said leaving. Bark to a breath and stood up “Forestpack has been doing fine we’ve had two puppies born..” ******** Lily walked behind Scout again calling his name silently. Scout continued to walk but she knew he heard her. She silently crept up next to him he looked at her once before going back to talk to Ripple. (Grr Fox is still writing as I speak)
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Dec 4, 2011 15:09:26 GMT -5
Post by scourgey on Dec 4, 2011 15:09:26 GMT -5
Fox wrote a code here~ The packs code[/u] 1. Never talk back to your leader unless it is life threatening 2. Never kill no matter what the past the packs believe in forgiveness 3. You must feed your pack first before eating unless you are a puppy, elder, or builder 4. You may not be mates with a dog from another pack, loner, rouge, medicine dog, or a dog with a mate already 5. No dog can be a pooch they must reject the life 6. There has always been five packs, including Starpack, and there small always be five packs 7. A warrior mustn’t do a Scouter or Builders dog same with A Scouter doing a builder or Warrior job or a Builder doing a Scouter or warrior job. 8. Any dog can be leader even a Scouter of builder 9. Within a pack there will be 9 jobs, Warrior, Leader, Deputy, Scouter, Builder, Medicine dog, Elder, Queen, and pup each have their own importance no making fun of a dog for its job 10. Warriors and Scouters MUST risk their life for their pack and shouldn’t cower down from a battle or walking in the snow 11. Packs can eat what they want as long as it’s on their territory 12. Pups must have reached the age of four moons before being apprenticed 13. No dog shall be turned down for joining the pack unless it has had killed before therefore it would of broke one of the codes 14. Builders must be in the middle when traveling for they build they don’t hunt or fight 15. If one pack is forced out of their territory the other packs must either help bring them back or leave their territory to come with them.
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Dec 4, 2011 21:17:23 GMT -5
Post by scourgey on Dec 4, 2011 21:17:23 GMT -5
Lily sighed and put her tail down looking at the stars which were still shining brightly thinking thanks Soul you’re so nice by letting my mate slip from me! She looked back up front to see Flame walking up there her pelt bristled and Sky whispering calm words to her, why couldn’t Scout comfort her like Sky comforted Flame. She was jealous that Flame had a real mate while Scout ignored her. She sighed and walked silently back to camp. When she entered the puppies ran over her paws and were asking questions. She picked them up ready for bed. *************** Sky woke with a yawn his claws sliding out as he stretched, he looked out to see Flame setting up patrols and talking to Coco. He walked out a picked up a piece of deer eating some of it then giving the rest to the elder Sun. Sun stared at him “Sky why do you care about me?” Sky shrugged and sat the food down leaving. “Sky?” He paused and turned to Sun “Yes?” Sun sat still staring at him “You need to spend less time with me and more with your mate, I can feel stress pouring off of her” Sky nodded leaving the den and looking at Flame every now and then. He sat down near the nursery and watched the pups. When he glanced back at where Flame was but she wasn’t there he panicked and looked around quickly. He spotted her sitting next to Fawn, her apprentice, and nodding her head lazily. Sky walked up and Fawn looked at him then bowed her head running off. “So when should she be made a warrior?” She shrugged then stared at Lily’s pups. “They’re about 4 moons” he muttered hoping she would make them apprentices. “ok” She said leaving to the warrior den, Sky followed his eyes darting back to the pups Sky smiled silently then turned back to Flame who was now talking to Shaken “Do we have room for 2 more warriors?” Shaken looked around and nodded “Sure but after that we’ll need to add on because we’ll be out of room and the other apprentices will soon join the new warriors” Sky nodded and Flame left to Cloud rock. She climbed up the sun had risen so the pack was already bustling with activity luckily no dog had left camp yet but were preparing to leave. “Today we have two more warriors joining Cloudpack in the warrior den. We are proud of their full battle practice and training, they will be a great addition to warrior patrols” She looked down at Fawn and Tiger “Fawn, you have practiced hard and well I want you to join our patrols as a warrior and defend your pack with your life do you promise to uphold the code?” Fawn nodded “Yes” Flame turned to Tiger “Tiger, you have practiced hard and well I want you to join our patrols as a warrior and defend your pack with your life do you promise to uphold the code?” Tiger was hesitating! Sky’s eyes filled with worry, was he really ready? Tiger paused again and nodded quickly saying “Yes” Sky smiled and watched Lily licking her puppies, for some reason she must know their ceremony is today or something. Flame looked at the crowd. ************** “we have four new apprentices their paths are unknown fore I haven’t asked them about them because I haven’t had the chance but this ceremony is needed” She looked over to Lily’s puppies “Spirit we wish to know your path” Spirit looked at Flame meeting her eyes “My path is a warrior” Flame nodded “Excellent choice as a warrior apprentice you will have several tasks including feeding your clan, defending it, and risking your life are you willing to follow this path?” Spirit nodded “Then by the power of deputy I make a warrior apprentice Sky has been waiting for an apprentice and now I grant him his wish, Sky you shall mentor Spirit” Sky walked over and sat next to his apprentice. Flame looked at Half “Half we wish to know your path too” Half looked at her, her tail trembling and her lip quavering she seemed to think it over in her mind before answering “My path Is builder” Flame nodded “Excellent choice too, as a builder you will have to build dens for your pack, suffer cracked pads, and have the chance of being crushed by falling rock..are you willing to follow this path?” Half nodded Flame looked around to spot Noel looking at her with pleading eyes. “Then by the power of deputy I make you a builder apprentice Noel has lived for a while without an apprentice and she has proved to have the qualities to have one, Noel you may mentor Half” Noel walked to Half and they sat side by side. Ghost was shivering more than Half was she looked terrified “Lastly Ghost we would like to know your path” Ghost gulped and somehow steadied her voice “My path is Scouter” Flame smiled and nodded again for the third time “Excellent choice, as a Scouter you will have to Risk falling into holes, Risk your life for you pack, and wander around holes to find mountain lions. Are you willing to follow this path?” Ghost gave something that looked like a nod and Flame spoke once again “Then by the power of deputy I make you a Scouter apprentice. Since Scout is your father it only seems right to give him you as an apprentice, so Scout is your mentor” Ghost had to walk up to her father and sit next to him it was easy to see she was embarrassed that her mentor didn’t want her. Flame looked over the pack “Tonight Fawn and Tiger will hunt for their pack and return with their catch to prove their ready to be warriors” Fawn nodded, her and Tiger left to the warrior den to rest. Flame looked down to the newly apprenticed apprentices smiling then noticed Lily looking at her paws, somehow that made her look at Sky who was talking to Ripple, Flame was going to talk to her brother about this.
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