Post by echopaw on Aug 28, 2011 10:46:02 GMT -5
"mom is gone thornkit lets go out and see the territory for a bit we woulnt go far!" i mewed happly to my brother.
"o-ok echokit but not that far." he got up and slipped out of a small hole in the wall and i followed him. the sight and smell of the flat land was very new to the two of us.
"echokit look! i rabbit!" we crouched down and pulled forward.
the rabbit (of course) saw us and bolted away but we gave chase.
"mouse dung!" thornkit spat as the rabbot went down the hole. "oh well we tryed lets find another one mabey we can get that!" i said.
"ok" me and thorn kit walked and walked but nothing came.
"i think we are lost!" thornkit said softly.
"no we can back tra-... what was that!"
i twig snaped and we turned to see a pair of gleaming red eyes looking out at us.
we ran but it followed thornkit turned and hissed at the thing and told me to run and get help.
the last thing i saw was the thing clawing thornkit up.
i ran and finaly reached camp wailing and yowling for help.
"whats wrong echokit!" snaketail ran over.
" thornkit and the red eyes and help!" i panted snaketail ran out of camp to find thronkit.
and the only other time i saw my brother was at his vigil and the morning he was buried.
i made a huge mistake and it cost me my brother....
"o-ok echokit but not that far." he got up and slipped out of a small hole in the wall and i followed him. the sight and smell of the flat land was very new to the two of us.
"echokit look! i rabbit!" we crouched down and pulled forward.
the rabbit (of course) saw us and bolted away but we gave chase.
"mouse dung!" thornkit spat as the rabbot went down the hole. "oh well we tryed lets find another one mabey we can get that!" i said.
"ok" me and thorn kit walked and walked but nothing came.
"i think we are lost!" thornkit said softly.
"no we can back tra-... what was that!"
i twig snaped and we turned to see a pair of gleaming red eyes looking out at us.
we ran but it followed thornkit turned and hissed at the thing and told me to run and get help.
the last thing i saw was the thing clawing thornkit up.
i ran and finaly reached camp wailing and yowling for help.
"whats wrong echokit!" snaketail ran over.
" thornkit and the red eyes and help!" i panted snaketail ran out of camp to find thronkit.
and the only other time i saw my brother was at his vigil and the morning he was buried.
i made a huge mistake and it cost me my brother....
