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Post by Kestrelfeather on Aug 19, 2011 10:09:37 GMT -5
***********Spoilers!**************
WARRIORS
a what-if fanfic
by
Kestrelfeather
here are lots of things:
Sandstorm probably might break up with Firestar D:
Leafkit/paw/pool and Squirrel/kit/paw/flight never be born
SkyClans destiny wouldn't happen
No great journey
Crowpaw/feather would never become Crowfeather, Sharptooth would still be bothering tribe of rushing water
Leafpool and Crowfeather would never happen
Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw would never happen
The three would never be born!
No midnight
Stormfur and Brook wouldn't happen!
No great journey! D:
WHOLE CHAIN REACTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Prologue
Firestar fidgeted in his nest. Sandstorm lifted her head and gently prodded him with a paw. Firestar opened his eyes, clouded with confusion. "So many cats..." He whispered. "Where were they going?" Sandstorm cocked her head to one side. "Go find Cinderpelt." She mewed. Firestar nodded and left his den, stopping for a moment at the foot of the highledge to feel the breeze in his fur. Then he leaped down and padded to Cinderpelt's den. He poked his head through. No one was there. "Cinderpelt?" He meowed. No answer. She must have been out gathering herbs outside. He sighed and found his belly growling. He padded over to the fresh-kill pile and picked out a thrush. While he was eating, he heard patrols padding out of camp. "Thornclaw, go with Dustpelt's patrol. You too, Cloudtail." Graystripe meowed. Firestar looked up from his meal to see Thornclaw nodding and padding over beside Dustpelt with Cloudtail close by. he's a good deputy. Firestar thought. His best friend was the right choice. He knew he had many more lives to lose, but Graystripe would be a great leader someday.
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Post by Mod Blackbolt on Aug 19, 2011 10:55:37 GMT -5
WARRIORSa what-if fanficbyKestrelfeatherhere are lots of things: Sandstorm probably might break up with Firestar D: Leafkit/paw/pool and Squirrel/kit/paw/flight never be born SkyClans destiny wouldn't happen No great journey Crowpaw/feather would never become Crowfeather, Sharptooth would still be bothering tribe of rushing water Leafpool and Crowfeather would never happen Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw would never happen The three would never be born! No midnight Stormfur and Brook wouldn't happen! No great journey! D: WHOLE CHAIN REACTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Prologue Firestar fidgeted in his nest. Sandstorm lifted her head and gently prodded him with a paw. Firestar opened his eyes, clouded with confusion. "So many cats..." He whispered. "Where were they going?" Sandstorm cocked her head to one side. "Go find Cinderpelt." She mewed. Firestar nodded and left his den, stopping for a moment at the foot of the highledge to feel the breeze in his fur. Then he leaped down and padded to Cinderpelt's den. He poked his head through. No one was there. "Cinderpelt?" He meowed. No answer. She must have been out gathering herbs outside. He sighed and found his belly growling. He padded over to the fresh-kill pile and picked out a thrush. While he was eating, he heard patrols padding out of camp. "Thornclaw, go with Dustpelt's patrol. You too, Cloudtail." Brambleclaw ordered. Firestar looked up from his meal to see Thornclaw nodding and padding over beside Dustpelt with Cloudtail close by. he's a good deputy. Firestar thought. He knew he still had many more lives to lose, but Brambleclaw would be a good leader one day. He just hoped Brambleclaw would stay that way. Ok first off why would Sandstorm and Firestar break up they did not have any "marital" trouble until the journey was under way plus it was originally made so that Leapool and Squirrelflight were to be born in between the 6th book and 7th of the series (between 6th of original and 1st of Np). I also do not understand how the great journey would not happen since it does not include skyclan at all and squirrelflight was not even one of the chosen one brambleclaw, tawnypelt, crowfeather, and feathertail were. Now if since Fire&Sands journey caused the birth of Leaf&Squirrel then the 3 would not exist and leaf&crow, squirrel&bramble would not exist but it didn't but you are correct in that skyclans destiny wouldn't happen and there is probably a lot that would not happen without them (Ie sol coming to the clans). |
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Aug 19, 2011 11:15:39 GMT -5
Ok first off why would Sandstorm and Firestar break up they did not have any "marital" trouble until the journey was under way plus it was originally made so that Leapool and Squirrelflight were to be born in between the 6th book and 7th of the series (between 6th of original and 1st of Np). I also do not understand how the great journey would not happen since it does not include skyclan at all and squirrelflight was not even one of the chosen one brambleclaw, tawnypelt, crowfeather, and feathertail were. Now if since Fire&Sands journey caused the birth of Leaf&Squirrel then the 3 would not exist and leaf&crow, squirrel&bramble would not exist but it didn't but you are correct in that skyclans destiny wouldn't happen and there is probably a lot that would not happen without them (Ie sol coming to the clans).[/quote] Actually they where born in Firestar's quest. Squirrelflight was supposed to come on the great journey. StarClan did not have the message for her, but she had a huge part in it. Also, while she was on the great journey, it seems StarClan wanted her to go by the sign that was given to Cinderheart.  |
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Post by Mod Blackbolt on Aug 19, 2011 11:19:14 GMT -5
Ok first off why would Sandstorm and Firestar break up they did not have any "marital" trouble until the journey was under way plus it was originally made so that Leapool and Squirrelflight were to be born in between the 6th book and 7th of the series (between 6th of original and 1st of Np). I also do not understand how the great journey would not happen since it does not include skyclan at all and squirrelflight was not even one of the chosen one brambleclaw, tawnypelt, crowfeather, and feathertail were. Now if since Fire&Sands journey caused the birth of Leaf&Squirrel then the 3 would not exist and leaf&crow, squirrel&bramble would not exist but it didn't but you are correct in that skyclans destiny wouldn't happen and there is probably a lot that would not happen without them (Ie sol coming to the clans). Actually they where born in Firestar's quest. Squirrelflight was supposed to come on the great journey. StarClan did not have the message for her, but she had a huge part in it. Also, while she was on the great journey, it seems StarClan wanted her to go by the sign that was given to Cinderheart. [/quote] no i mean before the super edition the erins had planned to make them born in between books and also starclan only chose one person from each clan to go i agree she had a main part in it but was not really changing the outcome of the journey. |
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Aug 19, 2011 11:21:12 GMT -5
I'm not an erin, so I don't know what they are up to. This is just my fanfic of what would happen if Firestar wouldn't have gone on his quest. Do you want me to write more?
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Post by Mod Blackbolt on Aug 19, 2011 11:22:04 GMT -5
I'm not an erin, so I don't know what they are up to. This is just my fanfic of what would happen if Firestar wouldn't have gone on his quest. Do you want me to write more? still very interesting theory's i like this topic set and can't wait to read the fanfic |
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Aug 19, 2011 11:23:30 GMT -5
alright thanks!  Chapter 1 coming soon. |
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Post by Mod Blackbolt on Aug 19, 2011 11:24:07 GMT -5
alright thanks! Chapter 1 coming soon. cool |
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Aug 19, 2011 11:37:10 GMT -5
Chapter 1
Firestar sprinted through the forest toward his old twoleg home. He sat on the fence for a bit, trying to remember the scents he once had recognized. But now it was foreign to him. He leaped down and heard a familiar mew. A leaped on the ledge like he once had, peering down. Smudge was pacing the twoleg nest. "Smudge?" Firestar called. Smudge jumped, bristling. He looked straight up at Firestar with hostility. "I'm not afraid of you, wild cat," He hissed. Firestar purred in amusement. "It's me, Firestar." He meowed. Smudge's eyes softened. "Are you really Fireheart?" He meowed. "Firestar now," He corrected. Smudge's eyes grew wide. "You mean... Your leader of a CLAN?" Firestar nodded. "Have you come back to stay?" Smudge meowed. Firestar shook his head, feeling sympathy as Smudge looked crestfallen. "Have you had any strange dreams?" He questioned. Smudge's face appeared more serious. "Infact, I have." Firestar felt exitement rise in his chest. "What was it like?" Smudge shuddered. "Cats, so many cats. Like a clan." he whispered. "I heard voices, but couldn't make them out." Firestar's eyes grew wide. "I had the same dream!"
"And I keep having this dream, the same as always. But there is never anything new." Smudge growled. "This is a dream about a faraway clan." Firestar meowed. "That once lived in the forest - right where you live, smudge." Smudge looked shocked. "That makes sense that i'm having these dreams!" he growled. Firestar had to ask. "Do you want to come with me?" He meowed. Smudge cocked his head. "To find the lost clan?" Smudge immediately bristled. "No way! I could never leave my house folk." Firestar nodded. "Alright. I understand." He leaped down from the ledge and heard a meow. "Goodbye, Firestar!" Firestar whispered, "Goodbye, Smudge."
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Aug 19, 2011 12:41:51 GMT -5
OOPS I think Graystripe was deputy then. Not Brambleclaw! I'll edit that.
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Post by echopaw on Aug 28, 2011 11:19:06 GMT -5
what?
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Post by echopaw on Aug 28, 2011 11:19:26 GMT -5
i dont get it
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Post by echopaw on Aug 28, 2011 11:19:42 GMT -5
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Post by echopaw on Aug 28, 2011 11:20:04 GMT -5
what happened next?
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Aug 28, 2011 15:34:39 GMT -5
I'm sorry Echokit for a bit this story was discontinued, but i'll start writing again! ;D
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Post by Kestrelfeather on Aug 28, 2011 15:35:10 GMT -5
WOOO 400 posts!
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Post by novastrike on Jan 17, 2012 10:05:34 GMT -5
write more soon ^-^
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Post by fairytailaddict on Jan 17, 2012 11:03:35 GMT -5
please do not bump old topics
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Post by Mod Blackbolt on Jan 17, 2012 18:35:46 GMT -5
Well Nova did not technically bump them up since she appears to be looking forward to more being released but this in itself is off topic
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Chapter 1 coming soon.
