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Post by ☾ Moonstar ✰ on Jan 17, 2015 19:20:19 GMT -5
Errr since I love writing poems I should write some here ;p Here's one of my best, and maybe later I'll add in the Palyndrome I almost finished creating ^_^ She thought he loved her for her beauty Or maybe for her integrity But it was only For that stupid popularity
Every night he went outside Seeking new girls to get at his side
He cheated on her Every time she went away somewhere
One day she came back in And with him, Two girls were sleepin'
She cried all the tears she had And went to the kitchen while getting mad
She clutched a depecing knife And went back to take that man's life
She stabbed him Good thing it was all a dreamNow for my palyndrome ^_^ Depression
Why do they Sob in a corner They shouldn't Be surrounded by friends They should Hide alone in darkness Guide them to not Seek the light They should Drown in shadows
They shouldn't Grow their own wings They should Close their eyes and Forget their life has a meaning Make them stop Thinking they are worth something When they should be Sulking and crying They shouldn't be Still hopingNow read it from the bottom to the top YOU LIKED IT? Well once I find back my papers I'll type some more ;p
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Post by Dawnsky on Jan 18, 2015 8:53:06 GMT -5
That was great! It was well written, but the entire time I thought it was kind of cliche, until that great twist at the end!
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Post by ☾ Moonstar ✰ on Jan 18, 2015 13:45:31 GMT -5
X3 thanks And yeah I like to do twists, its like : "SURPRISE PLOT TWIST! YOU CANT ESCAPE!"
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Post by ☾ Moonstar ✰ on Jan 18, 2015 16:26:41 GMT -5
New poem was added! ^^
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Post by Crescentpaw on Feb 5, 2015 2:30:53 GMT -5
All of this was so Fab
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