Post by scourgey on Nov 19, 2011 11:31:01 GMT -5
Hello, it's me Scourge I'm going to try my luck at writing. After watching Fox write I decided what the heck! Anyways this is Scourge's(not the one in the book the one I rp) story, I hope you enjoy! oh and also I might write something different from fox's because I remember more!
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Shadowkit(That was his real kit name if Fox told you something different she guessed) looked around yawning loudly. He looked to see Spottedpaw licking her paw, Spottedpaw was a stuck up apprentice in his opinion. He looked around searching for his mom who was the last cat close to him he wasn't very close to his uncle Oakstar. He spotted a warrior enter and it walked to Oakstar mummering something. Oakstar looked at Shadowkit his eyes teary. Shadowkit looked back at him confused, then Oakstar climbed Tall rock and yowled out. "A queen was lost today, she was found in a metal trap..The queen's name was named Mintclaw" Shadowkit's eyes widened, that was his mother's name. He looked around to see some more warriors enter, carrying the body of his dead mother. "MAMA!" He shouted running up to her and putting his front paws on her "You can't leave me!" Mintclaw made no move and he was tossed aside by a warrior. Shadowkit yowled out again crying, he felt as if the whole world was crashing on him, he no longer had someone to run too when he was sad or confused. He didn't know his father..He didn't have any siblings as far as he could tell. He looked at Oakstar trying to see if there was some kinda trick behind it all. Spottedpaw was calmly looking at the Queen, oh how he hated her. Shadowkit looked over the fields he saw nothing and left to the nursery(Nothing happens till apprenticehood now)Shadowpaw looked around seeing Spottedpaw again, he spat and left camp his fur fluffed up. He entered the moors stretching, then he saw a grey pelt flash after a rabbit. "HEY YOU!" He called out snarling at the animal. The animal stopped and ran at him, it tackled him and pinned him to the ground "State your name and business" She said, Scourge looked at the she-cat seeing she was his age and had red eyes. The grey tabby was smiling too. "I'm S-" He stopped, if she learned he was a clan cat she would certainly kill him..now what was the cat he knew from old stories...Scourge! Yes his name was Scourge.. "Scourge and I'm here hunting what about you" He said snarling. "I'm Blood and I am hunting too..but I'm hunting for Killer gang" Shadowpaw gasped and knocked her away, Killer gang!"Um I have to go.." he said knowing he was dead meat. "No you don't!" She said tackling him again and pinning him. He knew these were his last seconds so he closed his eyes preparing for pain then the sweet smell of mother. "what are you doing?" The cat asked confused. "I'm..." He didn't finish she bent down and put her muzzle close to his ears "I mean come on we're play fighting" Shadowpaw laughed and knocked her off pinning her. Blood laughed too and rolled him, pinning him. Shadowpaw smirked and playfully hit her muzzle. A yowl went out and Blood looked up immediatly "Father!" She said staring at the grey tabby with red eyes, he looked battle scarred. Blood backed off of Shadowpaw "Bye Scourge...meet me at the farm in the hay barn tonight so I can kick your butt!" She said dashing off to her father. Shadowpaw nodded and stumbled away stunned.
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Shadowpaw looked out the moon shining above. He got into the hay barn and looked around. He was suddenly knocked into the hay "HA! I always beat you!" Shadowpaw looked over his shoulder to see Blood. He laughed and they tusseled for a while. Shadowpaw felt right suddenly as if he know had someone to tell his secrets too but this was a Killer gang cat! He dodged Blood's tackle and sat down looking at his paws, he would tell her the truth and break this thing off. "My name isn't Scourge, it's Shadowpaw" Blood gasped "That means your a clan cat! You're a Windclan apprentice!" Blood said hurt filling her voice. "I didn't mean to hur-" Scourge didn't finish as Blood touched her muzzle to his "Shadowpaw, you aren't like the other clan cats why do you stay..You could join me in Killer gang" Shadowpaw gulped he had known Blood for a day and he already was tempted to join her! "I have to think about it.." He said backing away. "Ok Shadowpaw but remember with me you'll never feel lonely" Shadowpaw didn't say anything just ran out.
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Shadowpaw was playing with a butterfly boredly as Spottedpaw and Oakstar trained. Oakstar nodded to Spottedpaw acknowledging her catch then left. "I'm leaving Spottedpaw" Shadowpaw said. Spottedpaw looked at him "Really? Why?" She asked curously. Shadowpaw looked around to see Blood running at them. "Because of her" Spottedpaw gasped. "A rouge?!" Shadowpaw nodded the stared at Blood. "I'm joining"(As Far as I have gotten for now)
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Shadowkit(That was his real kit name if Fox told you something different she guessed) looked around yawning loudly. He looked to see Spottedpaw licking her paw, Spottedpaw was a stuck up apprentice in his opinion. He looked around searching for his mom who was the last cat close to him he wasn't very close to his uncle Oakstar. He spotted a warrior enter and it walked to Oakstar mummering something. Oakstar looked at Shadowkit his eyes teary. Shadowkit looked back at him confused, then Oakstar climbed Tall rock and yowled out. "A queen was lost today, she was found in a metal trap..The queen's name was named Mintclaw" Shadowkit's eyes widened, that was his mother's name. He looked around to see some more warriors enter, carrying the body of his dead mother. "MAMA!" He shouted running up to her and putting his front paws on her "You can't leave me!" Mintclaw made no move and he was tossed aside by a warrior. Shadowkit yowled out again crying, he felt as if the whole world was crashing on him, he no longer had someone to run too when he was sad or confused. He didn't know his father..He didn't have any siblings as far as he could tell. He looked at Oakstar trying to see if there was some kinda trick behind it all. Spottedpaw was calmly looking at the Queen, oh how he hated her. Shadowkit looked over the fields he saw nothing and left to the nursery(Nothing happens till apprenticehood now)Shadowpaw looked around seeing Spottedpaw again, he spat and left camp his fur fluffed up. He entered the moors stretching, then he saw a grey pelt flash after a rabbit. "HEY YOU!" He called out snarling at the animal. The animal stopped and ran at him, it tackled him and pinned him to the ground "State your name and business" She said, Scourge looked at the she-cat seeing she was his age and had red eyes. The grey tabby was smiling too. "I'm S-" He stopped, if she learned he was a clan cat she would certainly kill him..now what was the cat he knew from old stories...Scourge! Yes his name was Scourge.. "Scourge and I'm here hunting what about you" He said snarling. "I'm Blood and I am hunting too..but I'm hunting for Killer gang" Shadowpaw gasped and knocked her away, Killer gang!"Um I have to go.." he said knowing he was dead meat. "No you don't!" She said tackling him again and pinning him. He knew these were his last seconds so he closed his eyes preparing for pain then the sweet smell of mother. "what are you doing?" The cat asked confused. "I'm..." He didn't finish she bent down and put her muzzle close to his ears "I mean come on we're play fighting" Shadowpaw laughed and knocked her off pinning her. Blood laughed too and rolled him, pinning him. Shadowpaw smirked and playfully hit her muzzle. A yowl went out and Blood looked up immediatly "Father!" She said staring at the grey tabby with red eyes, he looked battle scarred. Blood backed off of Shadowpaw "Bye Scourge...meet me at the farm in the hay barn tonight so I can kick your butt!" She said dashing off to her father. Shadowpaw nodded and stumbled away stunned.
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Shadowpaw looked out the moon shining above. He got into the hay barn and looked around. He was suddenly knocked into the hay "HA! I always beat you!" Shadowpaw looked over his shoulder to see Blood. He laughed and they tusseled for a while. Shadowpaw felt right suddenly as if he know had someone to tell his secrets too but this was a Killer gang cat! He dodged Blood's tackle and sat down looking at his paws, he would tell her the truth and break this thing off. "My name isn't Scourge, it's Shadowpaw" Blood gasped "That means your a clan cat! You're a Windclan apprentice!" Blood said hurt filling her voice. "I didn't mean to hur-" Scourge didn't finish as Blood touched her muzzle to his "Shadowpaw, you aren't like the other clan cats why do you stay..You could join me in Killer gang" Shadowpaw gulped he had known Blood for a day and he already was tempted to join her! "I have to think about it.." He said backing away. "Ok Shadowpaw but remember with me you'll never feel lonely" Shadowpaw didn't say anything just ran out.
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Shadowpaw was playing with a butterfly boredly as Spottedpaw and Oakstar trained. Oakstar nodded to Spottedpaw acknowledging her catch then left. "I'm leaving Spottedpaw" Shadowpaw said. Spottedpaw looked at him "Really? Why?" She asked curously. Shadowpaw looked around to see Blood running at them. "Because of her" Spottedpaw gasped. "A rouge?!" Shadowpaw nodded the stared at Blood. "I'm joining"(As Far as I have gotten for now)