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Post by braveheart on Oct 21, 2011 7:14:46 GMT -5
A black tom slinked along the trees, he sniffed the air and sat down near a huge oak tree that towered over all the rest of the trees. A few more cats began to slowly come down, they had stars in their sleek fur. A brown tom began to speak, "I welcome all of you here tonight for an important anouncement," He began, "The three have been apprenticed, and I think its time we shall send them a message," The brown tom said, a little bit of growl is his meow.
"Hawkstar, it might be to risky to tell them now, there so young," The black cat murmered. Yowls of agreement went up through the cats.
Hawkstar jumped up, "Silence!" He yowled. The cats immediately quieted down and looked up at Hawkstar, the brown tom shot them flashes of anger, "They will notice there special power soon, and I think they should know so they don't misuse there powers," There was a hint of snarl in his voice. Cats murmered, considering it. "Then we will meet at the next half moon to discuss this!" He yowled. Cats began to split up in groups and walked into the trees, disappearing. Hawkstar began to walk into the trees, he looked back and slinked into the trees. (I know its not long but I don't have any more time...)
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Post by braveheart on Oct 22, 2011 9:39:55 GMT -5
-Chapter 1 Part 1-
Firekit blinked open his eyes, the sun was high in the sky. He stretched and sat up, enjoying the warm sun. Firekit noticed movement behind him, he whipped around. A black tom sat watching him, the tom had Lightningclan scent, but he didn't recognize him. Strange, I’ve never seen that cat before, he thought. Firekit blinked, then the cat was gone. I must be seeing things....Firekit thought. He began to wash his orange tabby pelt. He pricked his ears as he heard a yowl of triumphant , he turned to see his sister, Hollykit. The black she-cat was had caught a butterfly and had slammed into the ground. A movement at the thorn barrier caught his attention, Hawkkit, his brother appeared with Thunderheart, Lightningclan's deputy. No fair, Hawkkit gets to go out of camp, but I don't. He thought. Just a moon ago, Hawkkit found out he would probably never become a warrior because of his blindness, but that didn't stop him. He had told Jaystar straight out that nothing would stop him from becoming a warrior. Today was there sixth moon living in Lightningclan and today they would be one pawstep closer to becoming a warrior. Firekit could feel the excitement bubbling up in him. I'm going to be a warrior! The thought of it made him want to yowl his happiness to the sky. Leaffall, the three kits mother called to her kits. Firekit dashed over to her. Hollykit and Hawkkit were already sitting up straight licking there dirty pelts. The grey-blue queen began to lick Firekit's orange pelt. "Mom! I can clean my OWN pelt!" The orange kitten yowled. He scrambled away to be dragged back. Leaffall dragged Hawkkit over to her, grooming his pelt. Hawkkit's brown tabby fur shown golden in the sunlight.
"Sit up straight and tall, you three," she meowed gently. Firekit sat up as straight as he could, almost tipping over. A grey tabby tom appeared from the leaders den.
"Jaystar!" Hollykit yowled, dashing towards him. Quick as lightning, Leaffall grabbed Hollykit and murmered something into her ear.
"Now walk over there politely and don't run," The grey-blue queen advised. Hollykit dashed over to the highrock. Firekit tried hard to control his urge to run over to the highrock, but had difficultly. Hawkkit slowly walked over to the highrock. Jaystar jumped onto the top of the huge rock. "All cats old enough to catch their own prey, join beneath the highrock for a clan meeting!"Jaystar yowled."Firekit, you have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Firepaw. Your mentor will be Nightfall. I hope Nightfall will pass down all he knows to you. Nightfall, you are ready to take on an apprentice. You had received excellent training from Stormfur, and you have shown yourself to be loyal and brave. You will be the mentor of Firepaw, and I expect you to pass on all you know to Firepaw. Firepaw touched noses with his mentor, excitement showing in the orange tabby tom's eyes.
Soon, cats began to yowl, "Firepaw, Hollypaw, Hawkpaw, Firepaw Hollypaw, Hawkpaw!" Hollypaw's mentor was Windflight and Hawkpaw's mentor Silverstream. Firepaw now realized how much closer he and his littermates were to becoming warriors. I'm going to be the best warrior Lightningclan could possibly have! Promised Firepaw.
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Post by Deathwish on Oct 22, 2011 19:06:16 GMT -5
Nice
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Post by braveheart on Oct 23, 2011 12:25:15 GMT -5
Thanks
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