Oh wow! I must say I'm really impressed with the step up you've taken. The new intro is exactly what was missing for me. And see? Like I said it doesn't have to be THAT much of a thing, just a little something to get you immersed. Even those few moments allowed you to get a small feel for some of the characters and the clan as a whole, and allowed you to start to get settled in to your roll in the story.
I REALLY think you taking a step in the right direction here, I especially like that you managed to write in some background information about your character and your clans current status without it being the obvious, cringey, "1 hour movie" exposition (Except for the very last part, but I think you deserve a pass on that one for your efforts).
Just one thing though, right at the beginning there's a dialogue typo, it goes "... Gonna make clean out the warrior's den ..." it's missing a "me" in between make and clean out I believe. If school allows it I'll play some more into the game.
Post by thelazykittypet on Aug 24, 2016 16:00:01 GMT -5
Welp...The only thing worse than a bug is an irreversible glitch. Which i just found. I have no choice but to disable saving during the post-game quest level. For those who have the current version, just avoid saving and you shouldn't have any problems.
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Post by troubledspar7an on May 6, 2017 20:58:09 GMT -5
It is an advertisement of an independent Warrior cats game made by using the same game making engine (RPG Maker VX Ace). Look at the various links (Download, Forum, Wiki(?)) to find out more information on the game series.