Post by ☾ Moonstar ✰ on Aug 12, 2015 23:39:55 GMT -5
This is the rewriting and finishing of an old fanfic I had tried to make on this website. But I was too young so it was poorly detailed, with bad grammar and the great plot I had in mind didn't had the possibility to be well explained.
So, I'll try to write a chapter a week, minimum.\
SilverClan is the name of the community I was born in. I was told we were established in our territory for generations now. Our territory includes the Twolegplace that once was SkyClan's base, as well as a forest part unclaimed by the Four Clans, the Little Woods. Our Clan started from the few cats of SkyClan that stayed here, and found cover. Since we have so little ground to hunt woods animals for the whole Clan, our main prey instead lives in the TwolegPlace part of our territory. Oh, did I forgot to mention that by TwolegPlace, we mean only the peaceful and colorful part of it. We never wander off to the grey and huge part of it, we don't consider it as ours. So, this main prey of ours is dogs. Yes, we have survived and evolved into cats with strong legs, not only the hinds from our SkyClan ancestor. In order to hunt successfully, we always sends groups, and unless it's for the Little Woods, no cats ever wander alone. That way, it is easy to survive for us. If we catch 2 big dogs per moon, we don't need to hunt more, as the whole clan is fed. Oh excuse me, did I not present myself yet? My name is Moonkit, and I'm 5 moons old! I'm a white tabby she-cat, with silver-grey stripes and pale green eyes. My brother's name is Dawnkit, he's a brown grey-ish tom. Our mother is Mistflower, and our father is Stormclaw. To my eyes, my dad is the best warrior in all clans! I want to be just like him, brave, strong, and loyal. So even if I'm just a kit, I never miss an occasion to train on my own. Killing bugs, pouncing on leaves whilst windy temperature, not making them fly off from my stealthy movement. Queen next to mom had her kit the same moon as her. His name is Skykit, in honor of our ancestors, and we always train together. The current leader is Cinderstar, and the deputy is Graystripe, a she-cat I admire and wish to be my mentor.
Me and my brother were born on a full moon. Right now, it's Leaf-bare. Apart from the lesser amount of prey around, I don't seem to see what's so bad about this season. I love the feeling of snow under my tiny pads, I always giggle when I hear the elders complain about its coldness, because I adore it! I hear from far away Cinderstar's voice, calling for all cats, except kits, to meet beneath the High Tree for an announcement. My paws ache to just run and join the Clan, but I know I'm not allowed. From the comfort of the Nursery, I can only hear few of the words Cinderstar is pronouncing. Wait, did she just named cats that would go to the Gathering? Gathering?! That means it's the full moon already, right? I gasp in apprehension, that means I'm turning 6 moons, and I'll receive my apprentice name! I rush to my still sleeping brother, and push him around with my paws in order to wake him up. His sleepy head lifts itself up slowly, and his greasy eyes open at the same speed.
"Wha-? Moonkit, why did you woke me up, I was having a nice dream, I was training and hunting mice" He blabbered as he looked at me with sad eyes.
"Then your dream is about to come true! Guess what moon it is!" I shout with excitement, speaking almost too fast to be clearly understood.
"Wait.. is it the Full Moon already? Really?" He says, his voice tone changing and his eyes flashing open, revived by this announcement.
"Yes, yes, yes! But I do believe that they'll only name us tomorrow, since the Gathering is tonight... what a pity.. I have an idea! Let's play in the snow to celebrate! Mother is asleep, she won't notice we're gone." I excitedly propose, and then storm out the den to jump into the cold powder. My brother is following me closely, and pounces on me as soon as he has the chance. We battled in the snow for a long time, hiding when the cats left for the Gathering. Oh right, I didn't explained right. Since we aren't really in connection with the four Clans, our Gatherings are with TwolegPlace Clans like RockClan and GrassClan, as well as few Rogue Groups. It's mostly used for helping each other since TwolegPlace does be a harsh place to live in. Since the cats left, me and Dawnkit continue battling in the snow. I'm having a lot of fun, I love the cold and freezing feeling of snow. Dawnkit turns to me, trembling.
"Brother? Are you okay?" I ask , worried.
"I.. I'm feeling too cold, I want to get back to the warmth of the nursery." He says to me with sad eyes.
I sigh as I drop my head, and lift it back up to look at him. "Fine, go back to the nursery, but I'll stay here."
"Are you sure? You could catch something." He asks, just as worried as I was for him.
"Pfft, don't you know your sister? Cold can't affect me." I say with a big smile, sitting down and lifting my head in pride.
Dawnkit padded back to the nursery, rolling in a ball in the comfy nest of mom.
As I dive and roll in the snow, hours later, I sneeze loudly, feeling a liquid going down my nose.
So, I'll try to write a chapter a week, minimum.\
Introduction
SilverClan is the name of the community I was born in. I was told we were established in our territory for generations now. Our territory includes the Twolegplace that once was SkyClan's base, as well as a forest part unclaimed by the Four Clans, the Little Woods. Our Clan started from the few cats of SkyClan that stayed here, and found cover. Since we have so little ground to hunt woods animals for the whole Clan, our main prey instead lives in the TwolegPlace part of our territory. Oh, did I forgot to mention that by TwolegPlace, we mean only the peaceful and colorful part of it. We never wander off to the grey and huge part of it, we don't consider it as ours. So, this main prey of ours is dogs. Yes, we have survived and evolved into cats with strong legs, not only the hinds from our SkyClan ancestor. In order to hunt successfully, we always sends groups, and unless it's for the Little Woods, no cats ever wander alone. That way, it is easy to survive for us. If we catch 2 big dogs per moon, we don't need to hunt more, as the whole clan is fed. Oh excuse me, did I not present myself yet? My name is Moonkit, and I'm 5 moons old! I'm a white tabby she-cat, with silver-grey stripes and pale green eyes. My brother's name is Dawnkit, he's a brown grey-ish tom. Our mother is Mistflower, and our father is Stormclaw. To my eyes, my dad is the best warrior in all clans! I want to be just like him, brave, strong, and loyal. So even if I'm just a kit, I never miss an occasion to train on my own. Killing bugs, pouncing on leaves whilst windy temperature, not making them fly off from my stealthy movement. Queen next to mom had her kit the same moon as her. His name is Skykit, in honor of our ancestors, and we always train together. The current leader is Cinderstar, and the deputy is Graystripe, a she-cat I admire and wish to be my mentor.
Chapter 1
Me and my brother were born on a full moon. Right now, it's Leaf-bare. Apart from the lesser amount of prey around, I don't seem to see what's so bad about this season. I love the feeling of snow under my tiny pads, I always giggle when I hear the elders complain about its coldness, because I adore it! I hear from far away Cinderstar's voice, calling for all cats, except kits, to meet beneath the High Tree for an announcement. My paws ache to just run and join the Clan, but I know I'm not allowed. From the comfort of the Nursery, I can only hear few of the words Cinderstar is pronouncing. Wait, did she just named cats that would go to the Gathering? Gathering?! That means it's the full moon already, right? I gasp in apprehension, that means I'm turning 6 moons, and I'll receive my apprentice name! I rush to my still sleeping brother, and push him around with my paws in order to wake him up. His sleepy head lifts itself up slowly, and his greasy eyes open at the same speed.
"Wha-? Moonkit, why did you woke me up, I was having a nice dream, I was training and hunting mice" He blabbered as he looked at me with sad eyes.
"Then your dream is about to come true! Guess what moon it is!" I shout with excitement, speaking almost too fast to be clearly understood.
"Wait.. is it the Full Moon already? Really?" He says, his voice tone changing and his eyes flashing open, revived by this announcement.
"Yes, yes, yes! But I do believe that they'll only name us tomorrow, since the Gathering is tonight... what a pity.. I have an idea! Let's play in the snow to celebrate! Mother is asleep, she won't notice we're gone." I excitedly propose, and then storm out the den to jump into the cold powder. My brother is following me closely, and pounces on me as soon as he has the chance. We battled in the snow for a long time, hiding when the cats left for the Gathering. Oh right, I didn't explained right. Since we aren't really in connection with the four Clans, our Gatherings are with TwolegPlace Clans like RockClan and GrassClan, as well as few Rogue Groups. It's mostly used for helping each other since TwolegPlace does be a harsh place to live in. Since the cats left, me and Dawnkit continue battling in the snow. I'm having a lot of fun, I love the cold and freezing feeling of snow. Dawnkit turns to me, trembling.
"Brother? Are you okay?" I ask , worried.
"I.. I'm feeling too cold, I want to get back to the warmth of the nursery." He says to me with sad eyes.
I sigh as I drop my head, and lift it back up to look at him. "Fine, go back to the nursery, but I'll stay here."
"Are you sure? You could catch something." He asks, just as worried as I was for him.
"Pfft, don't you know your sister? Cold can't affect me." I say with a big smile, sitting down and lifting my head in pride.
Dawnkit padded back to the nursery, rolling in a ball in the comfy nest of mom.
As I dive and roll in the snow, hours later, I sneeze loudly, feeling a liquid going down my nose.
