Errors with 1.2 (Sorry if I'd be nitpicky)
Never bad to be picky (but then again, it's an INTP talking
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So my report (copy-pasted straight from my notepad (sorry about it being so late, I was busy with school and also busy over-grinding for the Tigerstar battle.)):
Typos/text boxing mistakes:
Talking to Bluestar after defeating Longtail before Ravenpaw: "Hello [name], beautiful day ain't-"
Dialogue box after talking with Tigerclaw: "...a black cat comes tumbling throug- the gorse tunnel."
Bluestar: "Since Redtail is dead, I must appoint a new deputy. The new Deputy will be.." Second deputy capitalized, only two periods (not ellipsis)
Conversation between you and Smudge ha a lot of lowercase "I"'s
You: "Well, I have to go Smudge, Chow." it's spelt Ciao.
Smudge: "Cya!" needs apostrophe "C'ya!"
Bluestar: "...we can use Yellowfang to learn about Shadowclan's Secrets." Reason the 'S' in "Secrets" is capitalized?
Errors/Mistakes/Glitches/Missing:
Plot gap from naming of deputy to hunting at tallpines
Yellowfang Scene: No Bluestar and Tigerclaw (this one is pretty obvious)
Exiting the Ravine is multiple tiles low
Things needed to be added on:
Tallpines map
Is there a reason why the border with Riverclan doesn't include the Sunning Rocks
Other:
Shouldn't Graypaw be a different class (not hero)?
Will it get annoying having cats following you when you have a full party?
Side Notes:
Did you give up on working out cutscenes? (No movement in the Ravenpaw scene, Bluestar and Tigerclaw not appearing visually in Yellowfang scene.)
Anyways, please continue pushing the thread whenever an update comes out, because I probably won't notice it if my Participated Log doesn't mark this thread as "New"