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Post by Whitedove on Jan 5, 2014 12:44:46 GMT -5
Prologue (More like a sneak peek)
Fishstar bent down to the gently rolling stream. She lapped up the cool refreshing water, tasting each drop as it splashed her dry tongue, and listened to the peaceful calls of the birds above. She lifted to her paws and turned around, strolling casually through the forest back to camp and enjoyed the slight breeze and warm rays of sun that warmed her fur. As she neared the entrance, a tall shadow about the size of a young fox loomed over her. She picked up the scents of other creatures that had just emerged from the bushes and surrounded her. The shadow she saw had become another one of the creatures and it appeared to be the leader of the group. Fishstar huddled backward, her usual smile had been replaced with terror. She stared at the creatures who were actually cats, but they were impressively huge and powerful. The tall leader growled, “It’s time Fishstar, you cannot hide it any more. You are part of the Severed, and we’re taking you back.” “No! Can’t I have a little more time? At least let me have a full life here! I have a clan that I have to take care of!” She said desperately. He looked back at the other cats and then sighed. Expecting a dispute, Fishstar tensed her muscles but only to notice that the cats were starting to depart. “Fine, but we will return, and you won’t like the consequences.” He said, while dashing away into the forest. Fishstar sighed with relief and padded back to TorrentClan. How could it be time already? |
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Post by Snowfeather on Jan 6, 2014 12:51:08 GMT -5
*wishes to see the rest*
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Post by Cheetahfur on Feb 9, 2014 13:08:44 GMT -5
ohh...I wanna read it!
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Post by Whitedove on Feb 9, 2014 17:47:08 GMT -5
Ohhh yeah, I need to update this. I've been on a break... heh
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Post by Whitedove on Feb 28, 2014 19:54:01 GMT -5
Chapter 1
Whirlpaw’s POV“So how bad is it?” Whirlpaw asked. Tinystripe was busy sorting the herbs in the back of the den. He had let Whirlpaw take on her first injured cat that needed treating. “I’m fine. It’s just a few broken ribs.” The tom replied. He had a few bloody scratches along his back and one deep puncture wound that looked like it could’ve been caused by a fox. “Come here then.” Whirlpaw had just finished making a bed of moss for the injured warrior to rest on. “You know you should really be careful out there, Blubberface. We can’t afford to have any injured warriors nowadays. Besides, SkullClan has been acting really violent for some reason.” “Yeah, Raventail was too fast for me. SkullClan keeps trying to take TorrentClan and FlashClan’s land. I suppose we’ll find out why they want it so much when we have our next gathering soon.” Blubberface tried to hold in a yelp as Whirlpaw had added a bit of a poultice to his wounds. “What happened to the rest of our warriors?” Whirlpaw replied. “They should be coming back now; SkullClan has started to retreat from what I last saw” Whirlpaw nodded silently and continued to treat his wounds. She wondered why SkullClan was acting so aggressive but she concluded that it was just in their nature. The only kind cat from SkullClan was Gravelrock, her old friend who helped her during the second war. Whirlpaw began to feel a little excited at the thought of him. It would be nice to see him again at the gathering, she thought. |
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