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Post by Featherstar on Sept 4, 2013 13:16:19 GMT -5
This is awesome so far! I love it!
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Post by Willowleaf on Sept 4, 2013 22:26:48 GMT -5
 But above StarClan? Hmm, if they fall, where will they go?
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Post by Whitedove on Sept 4, 2013 23:21:50 GMT -5
Eternal death! (evil laughter!)
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Post by Whitedove on Sept 5, 2013 1:30:12 GMT -5
(The story is now under construction of being re-made) 3/13/14
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Post by Foxy on Sept 5, 2013 19:11:44 GMT -5
This looks awesome!
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Post by Whitedove on Sept 7, 2013 19:11:24 GMT -5
How is the story so far?
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Post by ★Leopardstar★ on Sept 7, 2013 19:16:14 GMT -5
Its great~ ;-;
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Post by Willowleaf on Sept 7, 2013 19:19:51 GMT -5
Yeah, keep on writing!
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Post by Willowleaf on Sept 10, 2013 23:06:28 GMT -5
Chaos=not peace ChaosClan=peace? I would think they would pick a slightly more subtle name? But otherwise,I enjoyed this chapter. New and refreshing. |
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Post by Whitedove on Sept 10, 2013 23:12:21 GMT -5
LOL, I know right? xD Contradiction for the win!
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Post by ★Leopardstar★ on Sept 14, 2013 13:40:01 GMT -5
-high fives- good job.
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Post by Whitedove on Sept 15, 2013 11:18:01 GMT -5
(Story is being put into one post)
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Post by Whitedove on Sept 20, 2013 15:19:44 GMT -5
(The story is now all in one post)  |
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Post by ★Leopardstar★ on Sept 20, 2013 16:51:37 GMT -5
Good job  |
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Post by Willowleaf on Sept 21, 2013 16:16:49 GMT -5
Wow.
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Post by Whitedove on Sept 22, 2013 23:59:04 GMT -5
Well, I already have some ideas for a new story, but it will probably be less focused on Heavenclan. I'll definitely try not to have Tristar in a fight again due to being so overpowered. Still, I will probably start on this like next month or so.
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Post by Whitedove on Sept 27, 2013 18:37:06 GMT -5
I wonder if I'll have to make a new thread...
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Post by ★Leopardstar★ on Sept 27, 2013 22:08:14 GMT -5
Hmm... a new thread sonds good.
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Post by Willowleaf on Sept 27, 2013 23:15:22 GMT -5
Yeah, a new thread would be better. Having two fanfic titles in one thread name is annoying and lengthy, so unless you want to change this to Whitedove's Fanfic Thread or something, I think you should make a new thread.
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Post by Whitedove on Oct 27, 2013 23:07:34 GMT -5
Looking back at this story, some characters were Mary sueish. Ah well, I changed up my style in Dark Calling.
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