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Post by Willowleaf on Nov 18, 2013 3:31:12 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Nov 18, 2013 7:41:13 GMT -5
1. Scourge's collar color is debatable. In some books, its even yellow. 2. I never mentioned that Silverstar was a she... 3. NumberthreeNumberthreeNumberthreeNumberthreeNumberthreeNumberthree Norristar may be able to do anything, but will he do anything? He can turn into Starblaze and then nip Tigerstar's tail. He can activate the Annialarg (or however it's spelled) without destroying the universe. Moar numberthree
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Post by Whitedove on Nov 18, 2013 18:46:18 GMT -5
Nice, but Silverstar was the one that gave Starblaze her power, meaning that this whole situation could've been avoided. As leader of StarClan, I thought they would've tried to protect DarkClan. Also how did Tigerfang become the good cat if his evil was caused by Starblaze being beautiful, skilled, etc? This story had a nice twist but some things are unexplained. I rate 8.5/10.
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Post by Willowleaf on Nov 18, 2013 19:39:54 GMT -5
Yeah, I guess. The moral here is that power corrupts everybody? I don't know. Tigerfang never became "good". Just cats started to listen to him and see the truth. He wasn't really evil because Starblaze was so perfect, it was because she used misused light and there had to be a counter-balance, with dark. But the darkness itself wasn't what made him evil. It was from him turning from light to dark. Hope that clears stuff up. EDIT: Shhhh, I'm posting it on fanfiction.net Don't ruin it for anybody, the endings going to be a surprise!
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Post by Dawnsky on Nov 19, 2013 21:27:33 GMT -5
Wow, Willow, yours is really good.
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Post by Willowleaf on Nov 20, 2013 1:09:45 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by Snowfeather on Nov 22, 2013 19:20:42 GMT -5
if you guys still want a judge i'll do it
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Post by ☾ Moonstar ✰ on Nov 22, 2013 20:21:03 GMT -5
Random thing but snow at Texas cant be more could than hère. Just today was -12 celsius degrees
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Post by Snowfeather on Nov 22, 2013 21:47:45 GMT -5
Random thing but snow at Texas cant be more could than hère. Just today was -12 celsius degrees are you serious the coldest I've been in is -9 edit:but it was raining and sleeting today
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Post by Deleted on Nov 22, 2013 22:19:31 GMT -5
I know how to literally freeze Selenic Acid. It's easy.
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Post by Willowleaf on Nov 22, 2013 23:39:48 GMT -5
Random thing but snow at Texas cant be more could than hère. Just today was -12 celsius degrees are you serious the coldest I've been in is -9 edit:but it was raining and sleeting today Lol, the coldest time here that I remember was like 10 degrees celsius or something.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 22, 2013 23:52:57 GMT -5
I know how to literally freeze Selenic Acid. It's easy.
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Post by ☾ Moonstar ✰ on Nov 23, 2013 8:11:30 GMT -5
Random thing but snow at Texas cant be more could than hère. Just today was -12 celsius degrees are you serious the coldest I've been in is -9 edit:but it was raining and sleeting today The coldest I've Been in was two year ago and it was -32
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Post by Snowfeather on Nov 23, 2013 20:22:55 GMT -5
are you serious the coldest I've been in is -9 edit:but it was raining and sleeting today The coldest I've Been in was two year ago and it was -32 Lol, the coldest time here that I remember was like 10 degrees celsius or something. you guys are crazy i mean it gets like in the 20's or a little below sometimes but thats it, and it rarely snows thats just insane, if you dropped me in the north i'd be complaining all the time until you handed me a few thick coats.texans take heat not cold
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Post by Deleted on Nov 24, 2013 1:10:18 GMT -5
I know how to literally freeze Selenic Acid. It's easy.
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Post by ☾ Moonstar ✰ on Nov 24, 2013 10:40:03 GMT -5
Bramblepaw why are you still kind of bumping you sentence? Thats huh, weird....
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Post by Deleted on Nov 24, 2013 11:41:20 GMT -5
Doesn't someone want to know how to freeze Selenic Acid?
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Post by ☾ Moonstar ✰ on Nov 24, 2013 11:44:49 GMT -5
huh well.... its just a random thing your shouting , so okay! (No ONE BEAT ME AT BEING RANDOM! SO STOP BEING RANDOM! XD)
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Post by Whitedove on Nov 24, 2013 12:06:58 GMT -5
Mustard
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Post by ☾ Moonstar ✰ on Nov 24, 2013 12:38:57 GMT -5
Saying mustaard is not being real random... its just imitating being random. You can'T be random if you don,t have that IN THE BLOOD!!!!!!!!! And I have randomness in mah blood ^^
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