Moonpaw
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Post by Moonpaw on Jan 26, 2013 1:04:29 GMT -5
Moon= A beautiful white she-cat with unusual blue eyes, sister of shadow, and daughter of Jake and Jasmine Shadow= A dark smoky tom (almost black) with amber eyes, brother of moon, and son of Jake and Jasmine Jasmine= A white she-cat with a black tip with amber eyes, mate of Jake, and mother of Shadow and Moon Jake= A black tom with solid ice blue eyes, mate of Jasmine, father of Shadow and Moon ____________________________________________________ These are all the characters sorry that i might not get on much but i'll try to get on and type as muh as i can for You guys
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Post by Snowfeather on Jan 26, 2013 20:09:58 GMT -5
looks good so far ^^
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Moonpaw
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Post by Moonpaw on Jan 27, 2013 14:03:27 GMT -5
chapter 1 It was a dark night and it was Moon's very first hunt, and she was with her father Jake. Her father was there to monitor her, and help her hunt. Moon and her family lived inside the twowalker territory. "You see those twowalkers?" Jake whispered. "Yes."said Moon. "Don't go near them they can't be trusted, don't even look, talk, or walk to those cats over there also." Jake pointed with his paw at 3 kittypets,but these were different they looked more musculer than how regular kittypets were. And they had dog teeth attached to their collars. "Those cats that have colllars like that, they're the kind of cats you don't need to mess with and they mean buisness. They are called bloodclan cats their terrifying, but not as terrifying as their leader scourge, now come I'll tell you more about them later right now, we hunt" Moon was terrified for a couple of minutes, until she saw a plump jucy mouse. She got to her stalking position. "Since there's no wind it'll be a perfect for you, now creep up slowly and once your close enough pounce, aim for the neck if you can and don't let go of the body until it stops shaking." Moon did wat her father said, and before she even know it she caught the mouse. she was really happy she wanted to show the rest of the family. "Great job Moon now lets go home before those twowalkers or even those blood clan cats spot us." _______________________________________________________________________________________ To be continued.........
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Moonpaw
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Post by Moonpaw on Jan 27, 2013 19:49:35 GMT -5
Moon and her father ran as fast as the wind all the way home. "MOON!!!!" Shadow shouted with excitement when he saw his sister. "I see you caught a fine mouse, and its enough for all of us to eat." he gave praise to moon. "Thanks shadow." Moon was delighted. Shadow and Moon had a very close realationship. It was like nothing can stand in between them. "Jake! How was the hunt with Moon" "It went great she caught her first mouse today Jasmine." —————————————————————————————————————————————————— end of chapter 1
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Moonpaw
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Post by Moonpaw on Jan 28, 2013 17:26:59 GMT -5
Chapter 2 "Hey Moon, do you want to meet a couple of my new friends I met today? But you have to keep it a secert" Shadow asked his sister. "Sure, but why do you want to keep it a secert?" Moon was confused. "You'll know once you meet them." Moon knew he wanted her to come, she was curious about who his new friends were. "Ok I'll come." She was excited meet her brothers new friends "Shadow! Moon! where are you going." Their father was always protective and wanted to know almost every little thing they were doing. Jake winked at Moon. "We're just going out for a walk, we might bring back prey." Before their dad can say another word they ran outside. Moon spotted 2 blood clan cats at the corner of her eye."Shadow get down, theres blood clan cats over there." "Moon its ok, those are my friends." Moon was shocked from wat her brother just said. The 2 cats walked up to them. One cat had a ginger pelt and had a scar on his left eye, and the other one had a dark gray pelt yet they both had green collars with dog teeth attached to it. The ginger cat spoke and greeted Moon. " Hi, you must be Shadow's sister. Well my name is Storm, and this is my brother Hawk." _________________________________________________________________________________ sorry this is about as much I can type right now but I'll finish the chapter
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Post by Wolfstar on Jan 31, 2013 20:40:16 GMT -5
Awesome story Moonkit, cant wait for the rest
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Moonpaw
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Post by Moonpaw on Mar 3, 2013 21:11:25 GMT -5
Moon was surprised that her brother made friends with two blood clan cats, but she knew she to keep a secert or other wise her brother would be mad at her. Though Hawk was a handsome tom. "wow, you are exactly how shadow described." It was Hawk who said those words. "May we walk together." Moon had a warm feeling inside that she couldn't control. "s-sure." Moon and Hawk start walking together. ______________________________________________________________ end of chapter2
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Post by Snowfeather on Mar 3, 2013 21:14:31 GMT -5
I have a feeling who you want hawk to be... ( )
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Moonpaw
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Post by Moonpaw on Mar 13, 2013 14:16:40 GMT -5
Chapter 3 "hey moon i wanna show you a special place i found." "OK," Moon knew Hawk had something waiting for her."Um, hawk i was wondering, what's it like being in blood clan?" Hawk struggled to answer her question, "Well.... Its hard, our leader Scourge has really been too hard on all the cats on the streets. He even kicked his brother and sister out when they just asked him for some shelter. Its every cat for themselves in our clan. Scourge is a blood thirsty cat, he's even hungry to expand our territory. I Wish I wasn't one of his warriors anymore..." Moon interrupted, "Whats a warrior and why don't one his warriors anymore?" "Well a Warrior is someone that's loyal their clan and leader and follow rules, and to answer your other question Scourge is an evil cat filled with all ambition and he makes me and others do his dirty work, and if a cat doesn't follow his rules most of the time he has one of the warriors to kill them." Hawk Looked down to the ground. Moon jumps right in front of him, "I Had no idea your clan was so harsh on you and others." Moon started getting concern for hawk. Hawk knew what she meant he would tell her more,but he wasn't so sure it was a good idea. "Come on wer're almost at the place" Moon folows Hawk to the place.
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Moonpaw
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Post by Moonpaw on Sept 16, 2013 21:20:41 GMT -5
sorry i haven't been on for a while but i'll try to finish my story ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The gray tom stopped in front of some thick green bushes, and uses his paw to make a small opening for both of them to Fit.
~Shadow's perspective~ Shadow saw is sister walk with Hawk.He looked at Storm,"Should we worry about them? Cause I really don't want them to be seen by your leader or your clanmates." Storm thought for a bit, "We should follow them just in case." Shadow nod in agreement, and spied on Hawk and Moon with Storm. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ sorry but this is all i can type right now. and im really busy with Homework and sports.
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